Liberty

@savannah_grace2009 😭😭😭

it’s so good, but…but…but…

😭😭😭

Sef and Riker each need to be rescued fr 😭💖

@savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 Thank y’all very much💖💖🥰

@koshka @esther-c Thank y’all so much for the ideas!! <3

Koshka, I really like your idea of Riker meeting someone much like him, and I know who I’m going to do😏

also, does anyone else just get so infuriated by some characters even if one or two are just so minor…[Read more]

@loopylin

Alpha

“Eesh.” Alpha ran his hand through his hair again. “You had to ask the hard question. No, I only have a sliver of Wondian elf and human in me. It’s actually where I get my face and a couple other body features. I was given the blood of Grathmere,” as he said the name, his voice rubbled like thunder, and he spit to the side in…[Read more]

Funnn

*subscribed*

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, I love it!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… maybe you could bring Riker to a point where he starts playing what-if scenarios in his head. Like “What if God does really love me?” “What if I can actually be forgiven?” Etc. to where he eventually starts believing it. I’m sure he’ll fight it at first, but then he just finally…[Read more]

@beth-torres

(I’m finally getting back to you within a few days!! 😱😂)

Ok, awesome!

Hallie

Hallie blinked a few times, the awkwardness of the moment sinking in. Her cheeks burned as she took a step back. “Oh, I guess… Well… um, thanks?” She forced a chuckle. Top hat? She mentally scrambled for something else to say, but nothing came to mind.…[Read more]

@grcr

So, I know it’s not the most exotic on your list (five stars for unique names, thank you) but I started calling Reid in my head just to see how it fit, and after a couple days, I have decided Reid is the name for him. Than you for your assistance!

-RAE and Reid Grath

@thearcaneaxiom

I’ve done social media fasts before, too, and they’ve been very beneficial for me, as well. I also agree with what you said about children and screens- I can look out the window and see my six-year-old neighbor sitting on her swing but eyes glued to a phone, and that makes my heart ache. For me personally, I’ve tried to make a…[Read more]

@loopylin

Actually, Alpha loves climbing buildings, and trees, so I think he’ll tag along.

Alpha

“Really? Let me grab my climbing stuff and I’ll join you,” Alpha declared as he pulled a black shirt over his head. Alpha pulled out four things from his belongings, two he clipped to his wrists, and the other two were knives that he strapped to his…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I love what you just said! That aligns perfectly with how I’ve been feeling about the internet/AI. You’re right, this is part of our lives now, whether we want it or not, and to ignore it would be to our detriment.

We must learn how to use these tools in a healthy way, so that we won’t be placed in disadvantage. We must learn to d…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… stubborn characters can be troublesome.

Here are me thoughts. Use such as are helpful, discard such as aren’t.

• He already can’t live with his guilt/shame/hopelessness. That is quite obvious. He just needs to realize what is already clear to everyone else including the reader.
• Due to the very fact that he hasn’t…

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#alphadoesn’tknowwhothetoothfiaryis

#wondiansnotunderstandingearthlings

@loopylin

Lol, this just had to come up! This is better than a good knock knock joke

Alpha

“I heard a child talking about this culture doing something like that. Weird custom, isn’t it? I don’t see any practical purpose.”

@esther-c @koshka @rae Thank y’all so much for reading and being so kind! 🥰🥰 Oh, and *offers tissues to all*…there we go XD

Honestly, rn the only one who is a struggle is Riker.

I know where Leon’s story is going…I know how Leon will finally come back to God…I know how he will come to the end of himself…

but Riker is another…[Read more]

@loopylin

Alpha

“Yeah, sure. Feel free.” Alpha concentrated on his wound, his breath hissing as he inhaled through his teeth while he poured disinfectant on it. “I don’t get why you like those pepperoni things, they taste like my sister made them. And my sister makes cookies that taste so bad they could be a form of torture!” Alpha chuckled,…[Read more]

@stephie

Sooo… I feel really bad because I never was able to read the book 🫣 I really wanted to I just totally forgot/didn’t get the time!! 😭

I have a basic idea of what the book’s about though, so I’m looking forward to reading y’all’s discussions!

@freed_and_redeemed

Hurry up and get to the end when they’re all redeemed alreadyyy!! 😩

Jk jk 😂😂

Great job though, girlie! I loved reading some of your writing again!

@savannah_grace2009

(Sorry it took me forever to get to this!! 😭)

Ooh, I love it!! I really like how you changed it!