Liberty

@savannah_grace2009

I like this. It has good potential as a start. I think it really gets the reader into the plot. It’ll hook a lot more people.

I say keep it

@koshka

How long should I give you before deciding that you must have forgotten to post your RP?

I don’t want to nag, but if you think you posted and are waiting on me, and I’m waiting on you, no one will ever post. Ya know?

lolol.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

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The next morning, the adults were up bright and early, surprisingly before the children. “Amelia, why don’t you join us girls in the kitchen,” Sabina said when Amelia and Joseph appeared. “We can work on the big breakfast for the children.”

“Oh…

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@hybridlore

Vendailia is beyond.It’s not a bad idea to run the boarder, but it’s a bad idea to do it emotionally unstable and with part of a death wish, if you know what i mean.

Several soldiers already escaped by doing this.

@ellette-giselle

True.

Okay, that makes more sense. But why would William want to do that? What’s out there beside Ardenta? I get he’s coming from an emotionally unstable place, but it seems sort of random.

@freed_and_redeemed

Aww, it’s Leon. I’m so glad my favorite has finally re-stolen your heart. Seriously. If you can concede to that much, I think I can like Riker as much as Leon.

@raxforge

lol

@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVE IT!!!!!

So good. I can’t wait for the next book! You’re KILLING me!

@keilah-h

He’s older then them.

Believe me.That’s always the worst.

I’m glad mine are younger.

Then again, I always wanted an older brother.

@freed_and_redeemed

AND YOU ASK WHY I THROW SNOW AT YOU!!!??

This was AWESOME!!!!

I love this!!! I love it so much!! Ahhhhh!!! SO GOOOODDDDD!

@elishavet-pidyon

 

On a side note, I regret to share the recent passing of one Black Mongoose.

Oh that is great! That is so great!

These are the reasons I keep my laptop locked any time I get up.

I have two brothers.

RIP @power

Actually, don’t rest in peace. You don’t deserve to rest in peace after such dastardly…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

It’s good. I like it.

I feel like Alan should have been a bit more remorseful in the end. It felt more like he tried to snitch a cookie and got caught more then he was using black magic. idk. I would have liked a repentance prayer, maybe a few tears, idk. It just didn’t feel real to me. *shrug* that might just be…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Um, not at all their characters, but that’s funny itr makes you think of them.

Lol, That’s funny the David one makes you think of Alan. (Isn’t the hair wrong?)

@hybridlore

I wonder if that’s really going to be a problem when you are reading the book straight through, because William is introduced literally only two scenes…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Aw… it’s Leon. ❤️ I’m so happy find he’s stealing your heart again. I am concerned about this “broken it” comment, lol.

I really like the picture of him cooking with his daughter. It says a lot about him as a person and their situation. And the quotes are perfection.

@liberty

Very nice! Although I have not watched the movies (I saw part of the first one?) I can definitely apply all you said to the books. Including writing stories more like Narnia instead.

*chokes on snow*

@freed_and_redeemed

Yay! Onnendel is becoming my favorite of the cast. XD

Oh. Ick.

I should have seen that coming. That’s ugly. Wow. *…[Read more]

@esther-c Deduction at its best.

@keilah-h Very true.

Y’all. Now I need to get back at him…. XD

@elishavet-pidyon

No. XD (Although that would be pretty funny if we didn’t know until now, LOL). I had just recently learned that y’all were related and guessing from the gibberish and the “PWR” at the end of the post, I figured it was Power. 😉😂

@keilah-h

I left my phone open to this chat and shall rue it. XD

I am amused that @esther-c immediately suspected him. Do you know us in real life? 😉 XD

@elishavet-pidyon

🫢🫣😂

I would like to inform those who may be concerned for my sanity.

I have a brother.

On a side note, I regret to share the recent passing of one Black Mongoose. 😉