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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Lol, I was wondering when you would start wanting the backstory.
First I’ll reply to yoyr note on the scene.
You might want to consider trimming it down, but if you can’t, that’s fine. Just try to think about what will move the character growth forward and work for this story/target audience specifically.
So, it wasn’t sup…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle
(No kidding! It grows faster than a kitten!!)Yeah. Funny you mention growing faster than a kitten when I have one trying to eat my shirt right now (She literally has the hem in her mouth XD)
“You’re elbows are sharper then normal elbows should be.”
Lol!
@grcr @raxforge (the one who needs to rp) @ellette-giselle
Baron (Brut…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
How did you know GRCR was RPing?
I used my superpower that allows me to see what KPers are doing.
jkjk
Actually, it was simple deduction. I knew from the community tab that she was still signed in to KP, and according to the Recent Topics tab, she wasn’t posting anything in other forums so I assumed she was simply typing a long…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
wow. How did you know GRCR was RPing?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Awww! Really sweet scene. So… could I get some more backstory here? 😅 Aaron died because he was a Christian and didn’t give into the government, but the reason everyone else is still alive is because the gov doesn’t know they’re believers? And if Noah was tortured once for his faith, how did he escape?
I know this kind of thin…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I have written an rp but I think GRCR is currently writing one so I’m waiting to see if my theory is correct to avoid contra rp’s
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
hello! I believe you’re a new member here! I haven’t seen any introduction forum from you, but I just thought I’d say hello!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @linus-smallprint
Alrighty people! Have fun with this very long section! I hope you enjoy it.
Also, Linus, I am starting to have some high hopes for this book, despite what I said about it not being my favorite. I think i might enjoy it a lot. Just let me know if it’s starting to feel like a LTBL repeat. (If you would b…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Leon and Julian—with Baron, Ben Gunn, Flare, and Marcellus, Everstrand edge (No kidding! It grows faster than a kitten!!)
“I wasn’t going to kill…Ben,” Baron mentioned in his quiet monotone.
Julian turned and cocked his head sideways, a grin pulling at the corner of his mouth. “You sure had me fooled.”
Le…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Sorry, I was writing my rp when you posted yours, but besides Marcellus introducing himself no harm seems to have come from it.
Wait. What? Choking people?! WHAT?
Lol that was a very amusing reaction
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
im not gonna fill his rps up with my conlang, I just thought that one would be fun 🙃
I think it was kinda cool!
Oh of course! But be warned, Baron will try to kill you. *sigh*
lol.
How does this keep happening with my charries?!
In Character Party, it was Nahim and swiss cheese, in Adventure RP it’s Baron (Brutus) and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Leon and Julian–> With Baron (Brutus), Ben Gunn, and Flare, at the Everstrand edge
Leon whipped about as a voice spoke from behind.
“Are you from around here?” the newcomer asked.
Leon blinked. The uniform this stranger had on was unlike anything he had ever seen. He glanced at the young man’s boots and squinted. They did…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@jonas I would love a link to the doc! And also, I don’t care. We can probably reach the city with just one more RP, so feel free to add them in whenever.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
We have three groups in Elderstrand, if I’m not mistaking, which two do you mean?
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Ruth replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 1 year, 10 months ago
Got it. Thanks.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
This is one of the songs from a favorite musical of mine. It isn’t perfect, because the main character is married and has a son, but this song of his really reminded me of Alan.
Let me know what you think.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I was wondering the same thing.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Bring it on!
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