Liberty

@ellette-giselle Ok, I read it! I missed Adrian’s reintro, somehow. Sorry.

I’ll thrash a teenager any day, (particularly a guy. They can take it) but little kids……… Oh well. It’s for the good of the book, and may be for his good too.

Only thing I really noticed about that scene was some typos—and in Aaron’s letter, he repeats “Joseph” over a…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Yay! Leon and Riker working together! I love it!

As for triggers, Riker, I believe, would avoid guns and the sounds of gunshots. I have a neighbor with PTSD from serving and his wife asks us not to shoot anything more than air rifles or bows and other quiet things because the boom of a gunshot can trigger him. Maybe Riker…[Read more]

@hybridlore

That makes more sense. The last scene Joseph was terrified of Adrien. So, yeah, this scene is much sweeter. lol.

@ellette-giselle The one you just sent… I think 😅 I guess I missed the other scene.

@hybridlore

 

Weirdly it’s sending a lot of your posts twice 🤔

I know! I don’t know why it keeps doing that. Grrr.

Such a cute scene with Joseph & Adrian!!

Aw! Thanks! Which scene were you referring too? The last one, or the one I just posted?

@grcr Aw, love it!!

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Lol. Whaley tagged me @rar and Ellette tagged me @ rea

This is very amusing.

@ellette-giselle

Weirdly it’s sending a lot of your posts twice 🤔

Such a cute scene with Joseph & Adrian!!

@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore

“Joseph!” Asher yelled.

Joseph spun toward his friend and saw the ball in his hand. “Throw it!” he shouted, running several paces backwards.

Asher threw the ball and Joseph caught it. Eric came racing out of the house, whooping in the afternoon sunshine.

The days were growing warmer, and with the spri…

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@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore

“Joseph!” Asher yelled.

Joseph spun toward his friend and saw the ball in his hand. “Throw it!” he shouted, running several paces backwards.

Asher threw the ball and Joseph caught it. Eric came racing out of the house, whooping in the afternoon sunshine.

The days were growing warmer, and with the spri…

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@power

You are nuts.

Plain and simple.

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

Thanks y’all! This was so great to come home to!

I’m glad y’all liked Adrian’s reintroduction! It’s one of my favorite scenes.

Ah, thanks Linus for the typo catches.

There we go, there is that Ardenta mistrust appearing.

Yes. Glad you caught that! Not only is the poor kid traumatized by soldiers, (as alluded to in…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHHH!!!!! LOVE THIS!!! I think this is gonna be my favorite book yet!!!

As for the PTSD triggers, if you could list all the triggers under the names of the two guys, i can help you try to brainstorm ways they would avoid them. At the moment, I’m not sure which triggers they would be. I mean, for some soldiers after war,…[Read more]

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @rae @grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper

Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the c…[Read more]

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge

Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the c…[Read more]

Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the city, and Ben and Flare fell off the roof on us. Then our newest c…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHHHHH. I love the name Nikolai. Very nice. I might be more excited about the 3rd book than even the other two, although that would be kinda hard. *Stares hungrily at scene snippet*

As for life, yours is nuts too? It’s kinda reassuring to know I’m not the only KPer accidentally ghosting the kingdom. I don’t know if that…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lollll-XD

Life/Writing Update, Request for Brainstorming Help, and maybe a scene snippet👀

Hiiii everyone!!! Y’all may have noticed that I’m not super active here on KP anymore😅 Truth is, life has been kinda hectic,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Whoa, what happened to Brutus’ speech?

When whispering, /s/ and /t/ are most pronounced and can be overheard. Brutus often replaces these sounds with /th/ when whispering. It’s a precaution.

@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore  @grcr @rae @raxforge

Leon and Julian –> with Baron, Ben Gunn, Marcellus, and Flare, meeting up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel. Elderstrand edge.

Leon narrowed his eyes. He couldn’t be sure… but were those feathers on the stranger’s shoulders? He shook the thought aside. “We also came from ou…[Read more]