Liberty

@hybridlore

Thank you!

Cute scene between Joseph and Julian? Hmm, not exactly the word I would have gone for…… lol. I think I get what you mean tho.

Ah. I use the name Jesus a lot in my writing. It’s a name with power.

@ellette-giselle

Aw, cute scene between Joseph and Julian! I noticed a few typos, but that’s not a big deal. Only other thing is, I noticed that in Sabina’s letter someone said that the orphans need Jesus. I don’t know why, I can’t remember too many references to Him, so that stood out to me since many fantasy books use a different name for Jes…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

You’re not kicked. You just haven’t RPd so most people guessed you dropped out.

Plus, the boat crew, (which I think you’re characters are with) has done nothing for quiet some time because we’re trying to connect the other groups to them in order to have a little conference and figure out what on earth is…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

Okay, I made the suggested changes to the last couple of sections, and I’m working on some more Joseph/Amelia interactions. I thought I’d just go ahead and post the next scene while I take care of the other stuff.

NEXT SECTION

After Leon and Julian left…

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@koshka

Quincy was flopped on his back wriggling under a bush. Leo extracted him, taking a moment to brush him off before slinging him over his shoulder.

Best mental picture ever! XD

Rory

Rory looked up at Leo. “Go where? where can we go?” Panic was rising in his chest, but he swallowed it down. He took Leo’s hand and let the young man…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness!

He’s so cool In almost a…. hmmm….. not quite creepy….. maybe, in a shivery way. lol.

He’s very cool and very eye catching. Quite the interesting picture! I like it!

@rae

I know that was rash of Baron, but he’s a soloest so he doesn’t understand teamwork

See, this is what Leon was thinking when he was worried about Baron joining their team.

@liberty

I’m so glad you like it.

Yes, Marta was alright. lol.

@hybridlore

I don’t actually remember…it came up in a random topic a good while ago, which basically ended up with a bunch of twins talking Twin Talk and trying to understand Singletons.

@ellette-giselle

Okay, now maybe it will let me rewrite and post.

*Rolls eyes at phone*

Leo

Twenty-eight. Twenty-five. Twenty. Leo felt his teeth grit as the boy slowly climbed down the building. Eighteen. Fifteen. Twelve. He edged back from the fall zone.

Rory reached the ground and stood on shaking legs before sliding down the wall. Poor…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I’ve done did that before. XD

@raxforge @loopylin @jonas

Baron (Brutus) and Jenna—Elderstrand, Rooftop Team

Brutus caught sight of the girl, and the wind that whipped about him grew stronger. He helped Jenna the last bit to the rooftop, before acting. There was a blur as he rushed down to the guards, punching one in the chin, and kicking the other in the stomach.

I’ll…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh that looks so good!

I’m glad you found something you can use.

@ellette-giselle

Thanks again for the quotes! I didn’t want too many, so I put two more.

@raxforge @jonas @loopylin

Baron (Brutus) and Jenna—With Fel’s merry rooftop-leaping band

Brutus did not appear to like Ben’s question. Jenny answered it before he could.

“No, Brutus is just a guy I give hand outs too every once in a while, when he shows up. We don’t know each other that well.”

@raxforge

No problem. I just thought it was funny. You should see the grammar mistakes in my stuff.

@esther-c The cover!!! 🤩🤩

@freed_and_redeemed Aw, Hans and Felix 😭

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh that’s so sad.

Poor Hans.

Poor boys all of them.

@raxforge

There’s still a grammar mistake! 😆

It’s “Lord Quakers!” Rax walked towards the gloomy

@hybridlore

Power’s the oldest.