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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Leo
He looked back over at Rory, a smile twitching his lips. The strain of carrying Quincy was obviously getting to him, but Leo hesitated to take back the small boy. Rory looked more like…himself with that small head tucked against his neck. More alive and real.
What had he asked?
“Ah. Not far, no.” But not…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Rory
Rory hefted Quincey higher and wiped sweat from his forehead with his shoulder. Quincey was getting heavy, but there was no way Rory was about to tell Leo that. She merging in him desperately clung to the boy, the one person he had ever met who was weaker and more vulnerable than he was. He had never had to protect something, and it…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Oops. Once again the amazingly brilliant Koshka forgets to complete and submit her RP. XD
Leo
The street was quiet, making him glanced at passing windows to watch their reflection.
Still no agents.
But his shoulders itched with the feeling of something just beyond perception. Irritating. He shoved his hands in…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Is that a threat?
I love threats!!!!
Yes, she is a lot of fun.
Much better
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
He has become his own character with his own separate struggles and personality. Plot wise? Yeah, it’s different.
If you mean you’re safe to start knocking them off…😎 Beware of repercussions. 😎
Just kidding. Do what is best for the story.
Oh goodness! I love that girl!!!
You know, she would be fun in a RP with my charrie…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
This is getting very interesting! I wonder what shenanigans will follow now they’re all together, yet I’m worried about who is getting struck next.
I’m so glad it’s interesting!
I think by now I’m in the safe zone of not having a dark-haired Aaron instead of a Joseph. With the differences in ploit between the two books, I thi…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
This is getting very interesting! I wonder what shenanigans will follow now they’re all together, yet I’m worried about who is getting struck next.
Amelia is a sweetheart with a spine of steel. I love when she’s on set.
One thing that caught me:
Joseph could still remember the way and rode eagerly along the streets until they…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
This was the Bible study mentioned in the section right before.
Trying to remember who William and Rose are. Was Rose William’s wife?
No, no, Will was the fellow Joseph was talking to in the inn who was also working to provide a home for his fiance.
Is that what William was supposed to say?
No. I tried to different r…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Because he totally is on my side in this because he is a person who is on my side because he is on my side because he likes my side because he’s totally on my side.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
“How can we be praying for each other?” Joseph asked as the small group sat about the living room, open Bibles on their laps.
“Rose is ill,” William said.
Joseph glanced at the empty chair beside the young man and gave him an encouraging smile.…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
No problem. I have another collage friend who was attacked by a final too.
(They must be like Alcatraz’s Kittens.)
But the good news is that I don’t have any more school until January!

If you were writing something more witty, that would totally work.
Yes, but I’m not a witty writer. That’s your field.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Yay! I had just given up on you and was preparing the next section to post.
Now is this the Andrew that was in the first draft? (Also, I think you meant to say Sabina replied)
Yes it is! I don’t care if the reader never knows that, but I just had to make the little link because I know Andrew’s story even though it never comes…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
You still wanting to RP?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
‘Appreciate Short People Day’
*gasp* Now THAT is a day I would stand behind! (and not be seen over the top of! lol)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
They were small dolls. Just the right size to ride my brier horse collection. I did have an Aslan toy. He was smaller then the horses……
Oh well.
I made them swords out of toothpicks and foil. I think I still have them. And I sewed them all costumes.
I also did the whole Narnia series with my paper dolls when I was really into…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
(I mean, like the judge Deborah in the Bible helped lead an army, but I’d say that was an exception rather than the rule)
I KNEW someone was gonna bring this up! Okay, the Bible says that God CURSED Israel when he had Deborah fight. It was a curse on them and Barrak that a WOMAN had to lead the army. God says because of Barrak’s c…[Read more]
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