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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Sounds good!
I’ll see if I can get at least one of your new sections done today.
Wonderful!! Thanks! Looking forward to it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Also, what about Andrew Peterson’s Carry the Fire? We both agreed on that one.
Okay yeah, we did. That one is a great song.
Oh, looks like you mentioned the editor question. Ignore my second offer. I thought you might have missed it.Glad you found a good person for the job!
😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I don’t know how to send doc. links. so, here are my answers.
The Narrow Path Trilogy: Book One – The Cost Feedback Questions
Character
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
Alan. Because he was the redemption character, and I LOVE redemption characters. If you look at my…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
My sister managed to get away with one-word answers for the questions I did for my first draft
lol. That sounds like my brother.
I’m on it. Give me one sec….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
one older brother
LUCKYYYYYYY!!!!! That’s why I like Phil so much. He’s my fictional older brother.
I’m the oldest with two younger brothers and a younger sister.
My friend actually had Summer of Suspense and lent it to me. I liked it so much I looked up the author to see if she wrote anything else, and then I discovered it was…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
OH IT IS SO GOOD!
You must read it!
You won’t be able to put it down. It is stressful!!!
(Peder is my favorite character by the way.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
No! I’ve never been to Highland games. That sounds AMAZING!
Have you?
My dad has the German. Our last name is actually German, and I look very German, though my brothers take after the highlander and irish side.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Mainly just feedback. I have an actually editor who can catch typos, but if you see anything then you can mention it.
I hope Amelia doesn’t die.
Oh dear.
That would be an interesting twist—if everyone thinks she’s going to have the plague, but then she really ends up having a baby. But we shall see.
Hmm, it would be.…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Whoa. Can I ask how much of the book is still left? That seems like it’s going to be a lot of sections.
I don’t mind the longer pieces, though, (🤪) as long as you’re okay with me not being as nitpicky. Im not sure if you’re mainly wanting feedback on bigger things or if you want me to catch all the typos and everything too. If…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh this is WAY better then Mufasa!
No, I haven’t. My family is waiting for a time when we can watch it without my very little sister. She couldn’t see a movie like that!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Gahahaha!!! It’s sounds like Legolas and Aragorn looking for Gollum!
Is that good or bad? lolol
Alastair isn’t Gollum! *gasp* how horrid!
Hey…when you said this something struck me. Do you like Rolf so much because he’s German? *grin* I mean, this just reminds me of your German couple!
giggles sheepishly.
Well, being German as we…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
It’s already available on Amazon Prime.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I KNOW!!!!
We need The Hunt For Alastair, or something like that. Maybe Fergus and Jigson team up to find him!!
No, no, no! No Fergus and Abby. They would never work. They would kill each other! Rolf just seems so alive when he’s around Abby, and Abby seems so grown up around Rolf. Think of him coming into the kitchen of their own…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
We’ll see if this works, but I have decided randomly and impulsively that I will have this whole book posted on here by the end of the year.
Expect big sections in the time to come.
However, if I’m going to get this done it means that those of y’all who d…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
You’ll have to watch it because I DO NOT spoil things. ESPECIALLY character deaths.
After you watch it we’ll have to talk. It’s streaming starting today so you can probably find it pretty easy.
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Ellette Giselle started the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
(I made a new topic so that we don’t take over the snowball fight.)
This is amazing! I never met anyone else who read these!!
I LOVE The Treacherous Trail. I think my very favorite might have to be Hunting in the Highlands though. We’re Scottish, so I love it, and I love the Child soldier camp and Alastair is amazing!!! I love…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I was going to say, it seems weird that Beric would change so quickly, but now I see he’s still going to struggle.
Yeah. That new Christian/new place/new family/ thrill has just started to ware off, and now he’s hitting the hard part.
Then how does Sabina’s statement make sense?
Hmm. I’m not sure, I might cut that. In the fir…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh dear, I still need to catch up
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
@jonas
I need help.
So, Andrew (otherwise known as Raxforge) said he would like it if I could play a piano song called Quiet at Dawn by Galen Rise. It’s a beautiful piece, that sounds in my skill range, but I can’t find any sheet music for it (it only has a little over 900 views on YouTube).
I was wondering if you could help me make my own sheet…[Read more]-
Sure! I think it will be doable. I gave it a listen to see what it’s like, and it sounds like it shouldn’t be too difficult. It’s a nice song! I got the first couple lines written without much difficulty, so I should be able to do the whole thing, although I don’t know how long it might take.
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Okay, thank you so much! This means a lot to me.
If you would like my help in any way, plz reach out. If you’d like, I can give you my email.
Thank you again!-
No problem! Honestly, it’ll be good for me to have something to do, since I’m on break until the 21st and will probably get pretty bored. I will be on vacation this week, so I probably won’t get too much done on it until I get back, btw.
Email would probably be a good idea, since I don’t think KP lets you share files (except for images.) Mine is…[Read more]
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I haven’t gotten too much time to work on this, but I’m getting onto a better schedule this week, so I should start making faster progress. I’ll email you the PDF of what I have so far just so you can see it. Let me know if you think there are any mistakes. My ear is not perfect.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Also, I just saw what you said to Linus about Liam not being a Christian. Then how does Sabina’s statement make sense?
Sabina smiled through tears. “He is happy now. Much happier and safer than I could have ever made him, and much more loved than I could have ever loved him.”
Also, I don’t know if an orphan who hasn’t had a family for a long time…[Read more]
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Hey Rae, how are you doing btw? <3 Any story updates?
I’ve been great, what about you?
Story wise, I’m taking a,break with my novel, and more working on an anthology of sorts, telling the story of Baron. So far, I have two stories written, and others partly written.
I’ve also been drawing a lot of my characters recently.
Thanks for checking up on me, I appreciate it.
I’m good too! A little annoyed I have to go back to school, but given the fact I did a little dance when I saw your message back, I think I need socialization.
Yes, take a break! Since you gave me clearance to check on the Guardian Angles doc, you’ve written a LOT and I’m always impressed when someone has that much dexterity. The anthology idea…[Read more]
Lol, yeah, you should get out and see some people!
As far as how much I’ve written with GA, I currently have almost 60k words on my Word Doc where I type things…but I’m going to be cutting out some chapters and rewriting parts so…that number is about to drastically decline.
About Art, Andrew has been trying to convince me to post it (he’s…[Read more]
I should, but then again, I don’t wanna do schoooooool 😭
60k!! 🥳 Progress, girl!! It doesn’t matter if you’re going to cut a bit of it, you still wrote it and your writer muscles are that much stronger.
Hey, you know what, there is no way you’ll post anything more embarrassing than the stuff I have posted. Seriously. I still get migraines thinking…[Read more]
Yeah, school can be annoying sometimes, especially when you’re like me and have unpopular opinions on books…
Yes, actually, everything except my historical fiction is set in my fantasy/sci-fi world.
Yeah, it makes Andrew worry at times because he thinks he said something wrong and I’m just breaking down over some memory.
I’ll be praying for…[Read more]
The opinion part is the fun part for me, because my class loves hot takes. It’s the actual sitting down and getting work done that bothers me. Attention issues. 🥴 Do you go to a regular school?
Knew it. In the roleplay, Alpha mentioned a slyiad, and I was like ‘huh? You know what that is?’
It’s better to work through feelings than to clam up and…[Read more]