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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Joseph, Amelia, and Beric. I don’t know her brothers well enough yet.
I’ve let myself be deceived. My whole life I thought I’d never have the strength, and I was right. But it’s not about me at all! None of this is.” Joseph waved his hand to punctuate his words. “My whole life I’ve been worried about what I can and can’t do, but…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
No comment about the Uncle betraying them?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Ellette!!!!! 🥺🥺
What are you going to do to them??
lol. Wouldn’t you like to know?!
Who would you be the most upset about if I wipe them all out?
Glad the scene is good.
Preachy? In what way?
I can’t wait to see what happens next. 🥺
That emoji contradicts those words. l…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
That is so cool!
I do that sometime, but it’s mostly with personality, though sometimes I keep physical character descriptions that fit.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Good scenes, though. Joseph was a tiny bit preachy when he had his character shift arc, but it worked since that’s been his struggle since the beginning.
I can’t wait to see what happens next. 🥺
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/30/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(it’s loonnnggggeee)
“Would you pass the bread?” Stephen asked.
Joseph handed it to him, and Stephen cut a slice. “Amelia, this is truly an amazing supper.”
“It sure is,” Joseph agreed.
Amelia smiled…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I haven’t done the reading challange. I can’t remember why I didn’t. Was there a prize at the end?
and they made one of Hand on the Bridle!!!!!!
WHAT!?!? Where is it!? It’s not on the app yet! *sob*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
That’s not too much at all! I feel the same!
But hey, we could continue to talk here, or I have your email now and you have mine, so we could email one another and then we could talk about things that neither of us are comfortable posting on the world wide web! 😉
Up to you. It was just a thought.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Are you planning on doing more characters?
More characters from that book series, or more quizzes overall?
Yes, that’s true. With using AI, however, I have been able to use the eraser tool to cover up the immodesty.
I’ve only been able to find a blur tool. where have you found one that does that?
I thought it was pretty good, t…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh I LOVE Lamplighter books! I have several and they are soooo pretty! I also have the radio theater app. Their stuff is so good!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Huh. I have her story in one of Tolkien’s journals. It seemed accurate to me!
Huh, really? I think you would greatly enjoy his Faramir one.
Yeah, I just don’t like his tone. It puts me off enough that I no longer want to hear what he says. *shrug* maybe that’s just me.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
btw, I LOVE the picture I found for Miss Virton. And I think Jigson looks like he could be related to her! I think those two were the best, though Andy and Phil and Tom were pretty good too. And the dad.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
My youngest sibling is 5.
Underneath where it showed the person I got, it showed the percentage of other characters. Their names were clickable, so I clicked each one!
Oh cool! I didn’t know that!
There’s one minor mistake. Under Rolf’s name, you said he became a Christian, but in the books, there’s no mention of that. It does…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I have never heard of:
Scout: Secret of the Swamp (best dog book ever! set in ww2)
Hornblower series
Old Bones
Who wrote True to the Last? I may have read it.
The rest I have read!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
No, you have to buy tickets. However, at the games my family goes to, we volunteer to help and get to go for free. I’m not sure if all the games do that…you’d have to check their website.
Okay. I’ll have to check it out.
Wait, you actually do highland dance???!!!!!!!
Yes…. and Scotch/Irish folk.
Yes, that’s a good thing! I mean, I…
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Trailblazer replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yes, I do want to see it! Oh, I think I was going to reply again to you concerning your trip, but then it got hidden into history! Sorry about that! I’ll get back to you soon.
It’s all good! I’ve been pretty busy lately and haven’t gotten on here much anyway.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Rant Room for Baker Family Adventures Fans!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Sorry! Ellette wrote a mistake. It’s C. R. Hedgecock. Not R. C.
🤦♀️
I was trying to watch sibs and reply. Sorry.
I looked at all the pictures
whoah! How did you do that?!?! I thought only the creator could see all the results.
I found them all over. I wasn’t super thrilled with Abby’s, but it was the only modest girl with a h…[Read more]
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