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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Okay, now I have some for The Veil of Night. So, there are a lot more, but I don’t believe all of these will actually make it into the book. I already scrapped ten of them, and I feel like some more will end up going. (I had 45 for LTBL, but as you can see, only like 16 a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
YAHOOO!!!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Chapters 3 and 4 are out! I think I’m going to post these on a separate doc for now, and we’ll see how it goes. As of now, I’m also planning to post two chapters every week, maybe on Tuesdays. That way I’m not glued to my screen all the time waiting to hear y’all’s feedback, and it gives me some time to catch up on my…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yes, I can!
It’s pretty cool!
So, you read LTBL, right?
Do you feel like I’m missing any important scenes? Are you disappointed that i didn’t draw something? etc.
Also, which one(s) are your favorite?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yayyyy!!! Illustrations!!
(Even tho I already saw most of these haha. Great job!!)
Also, you can delete a forum???Â
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh, do you feel like I missed anything important that you would have wanted drawn?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Ugh.
I do not like full body illustrations. They are so difficult! Legs are awful! At least I can normally hide them on girls because of skirts and dresses. But Guys….. ugh. So hard to do.
Glad you like the horse. I love playing with angles. Oh yes, the one of the prince is one of my favorites. Along with Aaron and his sword…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
That actually sounds really familiar concerning what happened with those two.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
It was rough, and it was subtly done…….. yeah. I won’t go into it, but I went through a lot of abuse from them, but so subtly that it looked like I was the problem (I even believed I was) It wasn’t until things started to come to light and people started finding out what was really going on that i was able to see the truth.<…
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
Wow, that is a lot! Do you go to a mega church? I assume that because you talk about lasers and fog and such.
I don’t consider it a megachurch. That might depend on your definition, but most megachurches have more than 2000 members, and we’re not that big. We do have lights and such, but there are other smaller churches who use…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Once y’all have a chance to look and comment, I’m going to delete these.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh dear, I don’t want to depress anyone.
It was rough, and it was subtly done…….. yeah. I won’t go into it, but I went through a lot of abuse from them, but so subtly that it looked like I was the problem (I even believed I was) It wasn’t until things started to come to light and people started finding out what was really…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh my! I am so so so so sorry to hear that! I am glad he is gone now! But would you really consider those two were your friends?
I thought they were.
They were the only friends I had.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Guess what I just discovered…… I can delete forums! So I could delete this whole thing and remove TVON off of here once I have all the feedback I want/need.
Pretty awesome!
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