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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Good section. I’m glad Leon and Julian saved Hue. It’ll be interesting to see what happens in the Capital.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’ve encountered Karl’s in my day. Guys who can quote scripture up and down, but live in complete lies, yet they try to make it look like you’re the enemy.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Yes, that was the Stiens
Hmm, interesting that you should say that…………. I agree that the villain on the inside is a fun twist. I like this too.
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Ellette Giselle posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
Hey, I can’t get over your pfp!! Is that you and Andrew? (outside of church is what I would guess)
I’d love to know the story behind the picture. If you’re willing to share…..
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
(btw, there was a short section before this that only Hybridlore commented on, and I’m not sure if the rest of you got tagged. I’ve been told tags are acting up.)
Julian and Leon stayed in Clonabay for two week…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I never know what to rp
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Chase
Chase’s eyes wandered to the puppy. Such a little thing. He’s almost smaller than the wolf pups. Chase looked up at Felicity, actually meeting her eyes, his own eyes remaining green. “W-want t-to go?” He pointed out the window at the puppy.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
You are very welcome.
And remember…. I know where you live now…. I will hunt you down and I will find you if you do not post more soon.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
One, you used the word “fell” twice in one sentence referring to the pen.
Oof. Yup. I did.
Brin and Brinni are the same person.
Krazsimir and Kras are the same….
who is Vrati? Is he a third character?
Yes, yes, and yes. I’ll make a note on the doc.
Thank you!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
YAY!!!!!
Oh wow!!!
I love this!!!
Okay, two things I noticed.
One, you used the word “fell” twice in one sentence referring to the pen.
two… I got the characters mixed up a bit….
Brin and Brinni are the same person.
Krazsimir and Kras are the same….
who is Vrati?
Is he a third character?
If so, could…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
You got the section from today I’m assuming….
Or did you write that in reply to what I said yesterday?
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @anyoneelse @MGfantasylovers @honestlydon’tknowwhototag
*Tumbles in through the window*
Hi y’all! So, Project Gold Heart (aka the series Zlati and Vulka are in) has been renamed and is currently being drafted (Lord willing and I don’t dump this by June)
For…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Ohhhhh! Now I remember him! My bad—I thought Leon had recognized him.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION
Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..
The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.
“Ho…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Of course. I’m thankful God could use me to encourage you in any way. He will help you, if you but ask.
Here’s the full verse and reference.
No trial has overtaken you that is not faced by others. And God is faithful: He will not let you be tried beyond what you are able to bear, but with the trial will also provide a…[Read more]
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Yes, that is me and Andrew. It’s actually outside of the house of a CC parent.
In CC, we have what is called Protocol. It’s like prom, but instead of dancing and partying, we go to a 3-5 course meal and then a concert or play. The idea is to learn manners. We did a 3 course meal, then went and saw a concert of the men’s singing group,…[Read more]
Oh that’s so fun. It’s exactly how I imagined you two would look like in a situation. 😂
I wish our homeschool group did that. We just have the Winter Formal, no parents allowed. It’s pretty sketch.
Also, I’m guessing Andrew’s is from that same event? Those pictures are so fun! I love them!
Yes, Andrew’s pfp is from the “funny” picture we took as a group. He just cropped out everyone else.