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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Oooo, you care about him already!!! That’s AWESOME!!!
Hmm, I think I’ll wait a day or two to post the next scene……….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
HE HAS A TRAGIC BACKSTORY
trust me you will change your mind
maybe. I’m not so sure. Tragedy is No excuse.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Hey, I tried to take another look at your author pintrest page but it’s erroring out and won’t let me look. I don’t have an account, but I was able to see it before. Any ideas?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
well, for now I don’t like him. We’ll see after I read the book if I change my mind…..
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
because, Sara, he is clearly evil. I never like the badguys, and the misunderstood villains are the LITERAL WORST so that better not be what he is. Whatever sad background he might have, that is NO excuse for him being evil, which he clearly is.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Awwwwww!!! So sweet! Super cute.
Only critique would be this line.
looking at her mahnith one last time, before leaving her mahnith
It’s a little repetitive. Otherwise, I love it!
Also, how old are the kids now?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
yeah, go ahead and call backup. You’re gonna need it.
High five!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Monthly Prompts!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
This looks interesting. what is it? can I join y’all?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I was looking forward to reading this book, but our library doesn’t have it!! Hopefully I can participate in the next book we read together!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Ok, whatever. I guess I’ll just try to deal wh=ith it. It’s been doing since I started being on here.
I can say what I like, thank you very much. It is America after all.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint @theshadow @savannah_grace2009
Next section!!
It was nearly dark when the two rose to head back to the house. Turin laid a hand on Aaron’s shoulder. “Aaron, I am sorry,” he said.
“What for?” asked Aaron.
“For the way I have treated you and encouraged Sabina to treat you. We were both wrong, and I am most to blame,” s…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Finally!!!! lol. Ok, I’ll get to it! Interesting character.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Btw, does this happen to anyone else. At random times I go to reply to something, write the whole reply, submit it, and this shows up. Then Kingdom Pen eats my reply and I have to start it all over again. Is this a problem on my end? I usually have to give it about 5 minutes before it goes away, but it’s still super annoying to have it eating all…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
OH MY GOODNESS that’s awesome!!!! (If it’s anything like my first book you are not going to believe it even when the book is in your hand!) You have to let me know the minute it’s for sale. Any idea on price range? I’m setting aside a twenty at the moment, cause I’m guessing it’ll range somewhere around there?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Right-o. Fixing that.
Ok, yeah. I can definitely give a little bit more of an overview of the world in the beginning. Thanks for the tip.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Jep (Narsa Jeptune as Judy Emerson)
Her black lips parted in a cruel, sadistic smile as she watched the boys fight. For humans they put on a good show. Though they still have much strength yet to gain. Walking up to the group, Jep put a hand on one hip. “Hello boys,” she said, with her smile still on her face. “Having a little fun…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Chase
Chase nodded. It took him longer this time to make the image appear, but he eventually did. He pictured her smiling as she stroked the bird on her shoulder. “Is it p-pretty?” He asked. “D-did I mess up?”
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