Liberty

Anyone interested in reviving this topic?? I can put together a list of prompts for August if anyone else is interested… 👀

@whalekeeper

Wow, that’s a hard question. Ermm…

I think I’d immediately start thinking of a way to keep them here longer. Is there a way that they don’t have to die? It might take me a little bit to come to terms with the fact that there’s not. Honestly, at that point, I think I’d start trying to spend as much time with them as I can and make as…[Read more]

@keilah-h

well, I got this one. Hmm, yeah, technology always has something wrong with it.

@savannah_grace2009

You are so welcome! Write fast my dear!!! (Otherwise I will hunt you down…..)

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so glad i could be of help! I cannot wait to read this!!!

savannah_grace2009

Oh my goodness. when I read that one line…. it was like someone stabbed me. Oh, this is gonna be sooooo good! I cannot wait to read it!

Ah, so, plot twist, it’s Elroy who gets the redemption!!! I’m really liking this.

@savannah_grace2009

Um. That was a 180.

@savannah_grace2009

NO NOBODY IS DYING!!!!! WHAT IS IT WITH YOU AND DEATH?!?!

Oh what? Man. Fine.

It’s not that I want it to be sad, (sad is great in it’s place though) But Christian death scenes can be so beautiful though. Especially when dying for another, and/or as a tie-off to a redemption story.

@savannah_grace2009

Like Jonas said, this isn’t a direct correlation. Pythonos do, in fact, represent evil people AND demons. No person is irredemable, as I said earlier in this post. God can save anyone!

Ok, I was just thinking that you were saying they are unredeemable. If that’s not the case then no worries. Sorry if it seemed like i was c…[Read more]

@jonas

Ok, I could agree with that. The people do need to be redeemable though.

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks @jonas

Yeah, I think we just hit the major plot-hole. I think you need something between Pythonos and people. You see, even the most depraved of people do not become demons. They can certainly become demon possessed, but they themselves will not become demons. And Christ has the power to cast out demons. (I can find…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Fine. But sometimes the good characters gotta die.

But there’s a problem there. When we chose to live in sin, or even directly comit evil, there is still hope for us until death. Even the vilest of sinner can be redeemed by the blood of Christ. If you make Pythonos unredeemable, you are almost saying that the blood of…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lol….. we’ll just have to see.

@savannah_grace2009

I like their character arch! It sounds great!

I also agree with Jonas, especially if Cass is a Peter-type character. Ok, ultimate redemption––– Cassian is touched by Elroy, (Or one of the others, but i particularly like Elroy for this because he is kinda the family “nobody”) and through Elroy’s faith and selfless actio…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

OH. so I didn’t have to go from page one and work my way up.

You could have said that sooner.

@savannah_grace2009

Ugh, I can’t find it. I must be blind.

@savannah_gace2009

Her and Aaron? He can’t marry her because she’s not a believer and Aaron will not become unequally yoked. Plus, she hates him.

@savannah_grace2009

No, I haven’t. let me go take a look.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh I get that. I just mean there was no him thinking he was perfect at all. Like, it seemed to me, the reader,  that he was a humble and loving guy who wanted the best for sef and his brothers. There needs to be a little bit of that arogance showing. just a tiny bit. otherwise it’s not real. Ya know?

@savannah_grace2009

Oooooo I LOVE this!!!

Ok, one thing,

You see, Cass has a subconscious drive to pump himself up. He feels insecure about himself, so he manipulates situations in order to get people to look up to him or get praise. He doesn’t fully realize that he’s doing that to Sef, but it’s all a selfish desire to get those feeli…

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