Liberty

@linus-smallprint

You don’t have to do a “ship”

I didn’t for Against All Odds. I just skipped it. If you want some ideas, you can try listening to Sarah and my playlists.

@linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009

sorry this took a minute! KP ate it and I only now just realized that it didn’t send. 🙁

The days passed, and Turin, Noah, Aaron, Darrien and the others continued to tell all they met of Christ’s love and sacrifice. Many did not want to listen, saying there was too much going on to consider such things. T…

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@linus-smallprint

I’m 21. The other guy is 20.

NO WONDER!! I’ve been thinking “how is he so good with his critiques!!”

@savannah_grace2009

Oh yes, and what Linus said about Aaron goofing off and doing the handstand on the border is what I mean about showing a LITTLE immaturity. If you make him a little…idk, funnier and give his personality mor…

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@linus-smallprint

There is one who Aaron kind of reminds me of who is a year younger than me, being 20 years old

Wait, you’re twenty? Or did I just completely misunderstand that.

Unless I missed something, this side of his personality has kind of disappeared since he met Turin.

I certainly will keep that in mind. I feel like none of the situations…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

You might not be able to give me world advice, but certainly you can help with other things, like if a paragraph just doesn’t make sense, or a character is going out of their personality, etc.

Plus, what I mostly need right now is to see how readers respond to the story itself. ya know.

I’ll send the next scene if you’re ready!

@savannah_grace2009

ack! i messed up your tag. two messages above for you!

@savannah_grace2009

Ummmm I was the one who keeps getting your story COMPLETELY WRONG!!! Sorry again…….I feel soooo bad 😔😔

Don’t feel bad! It means I have a few things to make clearer. I won’t be around to correct every reader. lol.

(AND Aaron acts older than Turin XD)

Aaron is more mature then Turin.

I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron…

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Ummmm I was the one who keeps getting your story COMPLETELY WRONG!!! Sorry again…….I feel soooo bad 😔😔

Don’t feel bad! It means I have a few things to make clearer. I won’t be around to correct every reader. lol.

(AND Aaron acts older than Turin XD)

Aaron is more mature then Turin.

I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron’s flaws whether…

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@savannah_grace2009 @anyone_else_whos_intereste

                Against All Odds Playlist!!

1.) Jonathan: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_WNDIybIXs

2.) Jack: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bwvRaHmn694

3.) Villain: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IskFoAob2wY&list=PL61EA7836AA4687F1&index=6

4.) Main ship: There is none.…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

Ok, here’s the next part….. and then things get bad. lol.

Morning dawned, and after breakfast and a time of prayer, the men and boys went off to train with the soldiers.

Turin was a born fighter, and the way of the sword seemed natural and easy to him. Aaron, on the other hand, found sword craft less to…

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Okay, but you clearly said he did have a temper earlier, and @shadow said she liked it.

He was frustrated as anyone would be in the circumstances…… Turin is the one with the wicked temper around here. You can be someone who is naturally very easy going, but who does lose their temper in a certain situation, or at least gets f…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

ok crazies…. here is TURIN who is a TEENAGER and DOESN’T have a beard.

ok crazies…. here is TURIN who is a TEENAGER and DOESN’T have a beard.

@lightoverdarkness6

Howdy Light! I can’t remember if we’ve met, but welcome back!!

I’m excited to see some of your stuff, so tag me if you post anything!

Oh my goodness YOU GUYS!!!

OK, in the begining I said that Aaron was 18!! Turin was a year or two older Sabina was 16! Does that fix it???

I would suggest setting this story on Earth. You can still keep the country names, it can just be an alternate reality of Earth where there used to be countries with those names. Your world and ours are…

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@lightoverdarkness6 LIGHHTTTTTTTTTTT *TACKLE HUG* 💖💖💖💖💖

GIRL, GIRL, GIRLLLLLLLL!!!! I’VE MISSED YOU SO MUCHHHHHHH😭😭😭💖💖 I’m SOOOOO happy to hear you’re doing well though!!!!

AND TYYYYYYYYYY. I’M sooooo EXCITED for the release of Freedom’s Fire 🤩🤩🤩

It’s been good. Busy, but good!! Had more time with extended family lately which has been a…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Oh my gosh rowing classes? Like canoeing?? That sounds so cool. I’m glad you’ve been able to enjoy it now that you’re warming up to it!!

Actually, it’s much cooler than that! It’s the type you use for competitive sports. Some colleges do it, but I believe it’s mainly up here in New England. So far I’ve done sweeping, scull…[Read more]