Liberty

@the_lost-journal

Lol. That’s not the first time that’s happened.

KP is known for eating very long well-thought-out posts. I’ve started copying everything I wrote before posting it, and then if it gets eaten I can just paste it and send again.

so true

@raxforge

The imitate Christ one 🤣

@highscribeofaetherium

Yup. That’s what I mean. I just couldn’t think of another word to call them.

@kielah-h @raxforge

XD I found your reactions very amusing.

My big brother and I were playing tag with the dog, but Marley wasn’t running that fast until a gust of wind came and suddenly he was running as if his life depended on it. Hence, the weird quote.

@rae

I know!

lol.

@raxforge

That’ s because they don’t cook real chicken there.

The chefs would have no idea what to do with a real chicken.

@ellette-giselle

THE ONE WITH THORIN AND KILI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

@koshka

btw, if you tell me you’ve never seen this scene I’m just gonna laugh at how crazy imaginations can be. There really is nothing new under the sun.

GECKO GLOVES SCENE MI

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UIguWIkiaqY

“I think the dog is wind powered.” – me

@koshka

Yay!!!!!

Rory

Rory leaned out the window and swallowed hard. He had never really been afraid of heights…… but still…… well, there was a difference between being afraid of heights and being afraid of a suicide mission. “That’s a long way down,” he murmured.

“I can climb down with Quincy, and I could probably catch Sis if it c…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

WHAT! He didn’t go save Martha!!!!

Alan! Grrrrrr!

It was a good chapter. I liked it. I especially liked the brothers, (John and James.) Their relationship is a lot of fun.

i don’t know who you meant by anyone going to far, but I don’t think anyone did. However, I thi9nk saying Alan is a murderer is going to far. He hasn’t…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it!

Oh, i’ll keep those tips in mind.

@mineralizedwritings

Aw! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

I’m so glad someone read it!

I posted it a little while ago, but no one said anything, and I was thinking, “Oh dear, was it really that bad?”

lol.

I kinda felt like I was reading an anime lol.

I hope that’s a good thing!

@the_lost-journal

Nope, no war.

I should have snooped on your profile. Lol. Then I could have figured it out be reading more about you. lol.

@ellette-giselle

Leo

“I know.” Footsteps in the distance clicked faintly in his ears. A buzzing radio signal flared nearby. The security team no doubt. Leo looked at Rory, eyes narrowing. “You ever climbed a brick wall?”

He took the Kid’s wide eyes as an answer. Leo leaning against a classroom door as he fished around for the master key. Two…[Read more]

For all you ladies on here, there’s an online camp that runs every few months, set up sort of like our little kingdom here to help encourage writers and help them reach a goal. Before camp you’ll set a goal for yourself (writing ## chapters/scenes/blog posts/words/etc.) and try to reach it in that month. You’re a part of a tent of about 10 or so…[Read more]

Yayayayayayyyy!

I’ll definitely be posting on here this weekend!!

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, I like it!! I could definitely feel and experience what Jonathan was feeling and going through.

The only suggestion I would have would be to eliminate some of the passive voice (“The floor was sinking…” “…his brother was on his hands and knees…”). It will tighten up the prose and draw the reader in more.

But that’…[Read more]