Liberty

@whalekeeper

Oof, that’s ok. 🙂 Hope you feel better soon!

@liberty

I’m so glad you liked it!

Yeah, it’s standalone right now, but who knows? 😉 I haven’t gotten to work seriously in much of my WIPs, so they’re more like Works Waiting For Progress or something like that.

A sub-series is a good idea! I shall await your return. =D And maybe get some of my homework done. XD

@liberty

My stories? Yes. This short story is a stand alone, but I have three WIPs. Currently, my goal is to finish a novela by Easter. It’s one I haven’t shared much about, but is pretty close to my heart. Plus it’s a better springboard than a 3 volume epic or a 5 book series. XD

You?

@liberty

*Squeals*

Yay! Like I said, it’s such an intricately pieced world.

Yeah, most of mine are in my head too.

@ellette-giselle

Yes…

I may have to check that book out. =)

@ellette-giselle

Exactly! =)

@liberty

Oh, I liked your story. The worldbuilding and premise was so unique! And the frame story layout was a good touch. Does it belong to a larger story?

@elishavet-pidyon

oh of course. 100%

But them crying shows you made the connection! 😉

@ellette-giselle

Very true. It’s so much fun. XD I would add that we hope if we can connect to a reader’s heart, we can impact them in the long run.

@elishavet-pidyon

Idk, I love hearing that my writing made someone cry.

I think it’s because it makes us happy to know that we wrote in a way that made people care about our characters enough to cry.

@ellette-giselle

Aw, thanks! (Why is it so fulfilling to hear your writing made someone cry? XD)

@koshka

maybe.

At least they didn’t get sacrificed.

Yeah! No kidding!

I once read a book that is actually a true story about the “fey” which actually happened to be a druid cult. You will never look at Halloween the same way again. I mean, our family already didn’t calibrate it, but that book makes you feel a little sick when you watch kids t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

OH MY GOODNESS!!!

I was tearing up so bad!

I love the different meanings the prompt had in your story! His physical scar, but also her unseen one.

SO GOOD!

@ellette-giselle

Yep. Poor kiddos. Who knows, she may decide to write a story based on that “wild dream” and accidentally keep his memory (the things an author thinks).

At least they didn’t get sacrificed.

@koshka

Yeah. I know. That part is sad. Sadder then him dying. But in a way it’s also sweet because now she can go through life never having to deal with that trauma.

And yes, Celtic fairies are horrifying.

I forgot to do this. I’ll try to join in another time though.

@ellette-giselle

O.O Wowzers. I knew he would die, but I hoped she’d remember him.

@elishavet-pidyon

EEEEEE. You know what I think of this story. =D

@liberty

Your welcome. It was actually really good the way you left it. I like unfinished short stories because it forces the reader to come up with an ending. (I dislike that technique when authors do it with a series or novel though. I feel cheated) But yeah, it was really good.

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you! I wanted to try to do something…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh, interesting! I love the Celtic folklore inspiration. Fairies are so creepy. XD It’s a fascinating premise.

@rae

Here it is in all it’s ESL by a native English speaker glory.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v4ZJMMpmLEv0rVVsb7mpQG6OI0Xt1XpeWYZU5_934nc/edit?usp=drivesdk