Liberty

@liberty

Liberty…..

you are insufferable.

😂

NOTHING about Marius and the prince?

 

Oh, and…Dietrich sounds like a very interesting character. I hope you don’t kill him since I like him.

CALLED IT!!

As I was editing I was like….. this is going to be her favorite character!

@koshka

Uh, 21 is still between 16-30

@ellette-giselle

Why not bump Hans to twenty-one? So small a change shouldn’t mess up your plotting ect. but it looks like a new number. You do have a lot of ‘teens.

@linus-smallprint

Also, as for them majority being males, I grew up in a household of boys, and my sister came along when I was already in my teens. Sooo…. boys have always been easy for me to write because I can watch them. I find girls harder because I don’t really live with older girls.

@linus-smallprint

Nice.

ugh!!! Why did I know it would be you who would say that?! 😭

This is a big step for me! I used to only write people my own age or eighteen. Eighteen was the magic year that was always perfect to write. 😂

I have had some older characters…… somewhere……….. I know there were some.

The badguys! I had some…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

“If you look at the code before, you will see the two dashes and the arrow indicating the end of a comment. . .”

I’m looking for this, but I can’t find it in the HTML box before the comment you left. I did, however, see this: class=”mt-2″ placeholder=””> –> directly below the comment. Is that what you were referring to?

So if…[Read more]

@koshka

lololol. This book has already been written, and I’m not changing anything, so don’t worry about that. You can email the ideas to me so as to keep the others in the dark though. 😉

@ellette-giselle

Yessss…but they’re kinda vague and uncertain. And I don’t want to give you ideas if I’m wrong.

@koshka

That emoji really shouldn’t fit you in mad author mode as well as it does. XD

🤣

Julian and Leon both it seems, though Leon’s was more of an encouragement and Julian’s a bit of correction.

Still sorting out who’s going to die before the end of this book, so you’ve done well there.

Have you got any guesses?

@ellette-giselle

That emoji really shouldn’t fit you in mad author mode as well as it does. XD

I see Jillian is having to play a Paul and straighten out churches through letters.

Still sorting out who’s going to die before the end of this book, so you’ve done well there.

@grcr

Yay! I was enjoying TPE. (says the person who hasn’t really commented on that thread. Sorry.)

The song list is very comprehensive. I am in mild awe. I’ll have to listen in on it a bit.

@hybridlore

Unless he came back at the head of an army….. 😈

@whalekeeper

Oo. I’ll have to look at those.

Right now I’m listening to my happy music. XD Which today, is apparently Slava Lui (by Alin Si Emima) and Hineh Ma Tov (by James Wilson). lol.

If I made a playlist describing myself, it would be so convoluted.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I gotcha. But it did catch me off guard.

I feel like he won’t … but I could be wrong. And if he betrayed them, he probably wouldn’t come back.

@hybridlore

Yes, but that was a direct scripture quotation, and I’m not going to add my country names into that. 😉

Are ya now? What if he betrays them?

@freed_and_redeemed

Ohhh, they look so good!!!

@ellette-giselle

The new section looks good too! It did confuse me when, in the letter, they mentioned that Jews were not better than Greeks. This seems kind of out of place in your fantasy world. Maybe cut that sentence, or you could put, Ardentans are not greater than those of the Empire? Or something like  that.

Anyway, good job! I’m ro…[Read more]

@koshka

Gotcha.

If it’s PTSD in particular I don’t have much. I have research on gas trauma from WW1, but otherwise I haven’t got a ton. I do have heaps of info on things happening during the war. Here’s two I have bookmarked.

h ttps://www.history.com/articles/history-of-ptsd-and-shell-shock

h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s651JQxSPlU

@stephie

lol.

*takes a cupcake*

*thinks*

Ok. The problem with Bubble Wrap is that it’s kinda single time use. Two or three good hits in a fight and several spots will be very thin. A good gambeson would basically be multi-use bubble wrap. The popping sound could be fun though.

@liberty

Black horse for a black rider.

What can I say?