Liberty

@ellette-giselle

Not sure why…. but for some reason I’m not understanding this. Is there a typo…. or am I really crazy?

26 How is it then, brethren? Whenever you come together, each of you has a psalm, has a teaching, has a tongue, has a revelation, has an interpretation. Let all things be done for [a]edification.

When the church came together…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay…

I was not expecting that. Especially at the end of the book!!!! You just crushed my heart again by killing another favorite character…

Despite the heart-wrenching deaths of *sob* the prince and his friend…it was a great ending and I’m intrigued by this mysterious character who wrote the letter.

@ellette-giselle

NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭

I was utterly shocked…stunned…I even started to cry again!!!!!!

I said I hoped you didn’t kill him…..*sobbing*

That’s all I can say right now…

@ellette-giselle

Diedrich said.

Um…its Dietrich?

“I can’t get up,” Julian moaned. “I need to take my boots off.”

I love these lines!

At that moment, Leon knew what he had been missing the whole time. “Yes,” he whispered.  “This is war.”

*pumping my fist in the air* This is Awesome!!

“Someone shot it at me last night.” He rose and stumbled to t…

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@ellette-giselle

That was awesome!!! I really got sucked into the story again! I was shrinking inwardly for Leon! I thought he really was going to get whipped…again! Then when Dietrich came…I celebrated!!! So awesome!

I also like how you show Leon and Julian admonishing and encouraging the believers from the previous towns. It’s nice to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wilhelm took another breath to steady himself. “My name is not Wilhelm Baumann. I am Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haidronias.”

That is so funny! When Wilhelm was first introduced, I actually thought, “That may be the prince…but in disguise!”

“One day, when I am Emperor, I will cleanse this land. I will destroy ever idol and t…

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@ellette-giselle

“Careful?” Leon laughed. “Julain, I never thought those words would cross your lips.”

😂

@ellette-giselle

*squealing with excitement* I can’t wait to hear about it!

@ellette-giselle

Wait…is this the second book in the CR series? Or a new story you haven’t told me about?

@ellette-giselle

you are insufferable.

Why thank you!

CALLED IT!!

As I was editing I was like….. this is going to be her favorite character!

*sheepish grin* I guess you know how to write a “Liberty’s favorite character” now.

@ellette-giselle

that’s all you have to say about that section?!?!

*nod*

Oh, and…Dietrich sounds like a very interesting character. I hope you don’t kill him since I like him.

@ellette-giselle

(grin. grin)

then a black horse with a rider,

Another black horse?

@ellette-giselle

It could also be said Helen with the “e” still added.

Phew! I’m so relieved.

Shy. Rather a bit of a coward sometimes. Didn’t want to ever draw attention to himself. Relied on Julian as spokesman and decision maker. Very quiet. Never, ever did anything that went against what others were doing.

Interesting! My Adrian is kind of li…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I forgot…is Leon and Julian writing in the same journal? Or do they each have their own?

@ellette-giselle

Good morning!!! You’re bright and early! Normally Hybridlore is my first reader. Looks like you got her place! 😂

😄

Oh wait…Helene is said like He-leen?

Oh, come on! Adrian wasn’t always dead. I would like to know what he was like when he was alive on earth.

Speaking of Adrians, have you ever read “Lysbeth”?
No! What’…

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@ellette-giselle

*squeals with delight over a new treasure*

Erich and his wife Helene are such a sweet couple, and Erich has the makings of a strong leader.

*dances around the room*

I am SO stealing that name from you!!!!!!! I have a Helen in my story…but I never thought of spelling it like that! It fits my character so much more to add an…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Cool!!! I really liked the idea of a Daniel twist. Plus, it gives me Narnia fkashbacks with Shasta in the desert. That just makes me happy. 😊

Yes! I was reminded of Shasta as well!

But why do you like him over Rolf’s other friends??! (I mean, I like him best, but I know his entire story. You just saw a tiny bit of i…

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@ellette-giselle

Another thing:

Why is it that bad guys always seem to ride black horses?

“Because, God has called me to bring the message of salvation to my people,” Rolf replied.

Hmmm…I thought you were going to take the story to where God had called those two to stay there and evangelize that area…but I guess not.

Leon smirked, havi…

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@ellette-giselle

Neat! I loved the part of when the lion came to rescue them. As soon as I read about that lion I knew it was there to protect them!!!! That happened to a character of mine as well.

Hmm…the part when they got tied in the dessert gave me flashbacks of Leiand.

And…*crying* You killed another one of my favorite characters! Why…[Read more]

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