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@koshka

Hear, hear! At least, all the good books.

@koshka

Oh, good. For a moment, I was worried you were saying there were already enough books for YA and MG.

@koshka

Really though, if you want to write for kid’s or YA, know that there’s not a lot of places so in need of what you have to say.

I’m sorry, could you rewrite this sentence? I don’t think I understand it.

Hmm…yes, I agree with you about the Dawn. Totally.

@elishavet-pidyon

And yes, Yigal was military. There’s a lot of flower/name symbolism in the story… did you catch it?

Yes, I did catch it…but I didn’t know that it was related to the military. Guess I learned something new.

@koshka

Look out. I’m a mildly passionate children’s writer, and I’m always ready to recruit a few more. 😉

What do you mean??

@raxforge

Oh my gosh. I’m sure Tim never did that. At least, I hope he wouldn’t. His poor grandfather. So, what that how he got his scar? Or was it really in the war?

@calyhuge

Woah. I just read your story. I can see many people saying it’s gross…but it’s kind of intriguing. (I have a fascination for popping abscesses and pussy things like that.) Most people wouldn’t anthropomorphize pus.

Your writing style reminds me of my brother’s. Must be a boy thing!

If you aren’t able to request access to my…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Well, there’s nothing new under the sun!

That’s certainly true!

@elishavet-pidyon

Was Yigal in the military?

@ellette-giselle

The concept (a boy is only allowed to see the sun, and a girl is always in darkness) is so much like yours!

@calyhuge

I think requesting access is the only way.

@koshka

Yeah…that’s what I’ve been wrestling with. I first thought it would be MG, but as I worked more on the plot, I started thinking, “This sounds more like YA.” But I didn’t like the idea of writing it for YA. I’ll see more when I start writing it and see the tone of the story more, but for now, I’m “writing” it for both age groups.

@calyhuge

What story are you trying to access?

@elishavet-pidyon

Righto! I’m back! So, my Buddy Brindle series encompasses either three or four books. I still haven’t decided which one to go with. It’s set in a world where the people characters are animals. Dogs are the main ones, but I also have wolves, cats, horses, and others.

The story is about two dogs and how each chose a…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Woaha, 3 WIPs??

Yes, I’m planning on doing so as well. The Guards story is actually a sub-series from my WIP: Buddy Brindle. I’ll tell you more later…I’ve got to go to a planning meeting with my family first.

@elishavet-pidyon

Oh, silly me. I forgot to read your answer above.

@ellette-giselle

WOWWW! I love your story!! The sacrifice of Tauren is so touching. It reminds me so much of “The Day Boy and the Night Girl”. Have you read it?

@elishavet-pidyon

So sweet and sad! Beautiful writing! Is this part of a larger story?

@elishavet-pidyon

Are you planning to put it on paper?

@elishavet-pidyon

Yes, it does…though it’s currently all my head still!

@ellette-giselle

Wow, thanks! (I was actually intending to write more, but I ran out of time! Thankfully, where I’d ended was a good spot!)

@rae

Do you have access, now? I got two requests, which I granted, but I wasn’t sure if you were one of them.