Liberty

Oh, I forgot to tag you:

@esther-c

A neat and sweet story! When I first read it, it seemed your writing was in a different time zone/tense than the italicized beginning. To me, it seemed like the narrative suddenly switched to more present tense…like the character was actually experiencing everything instead of writing it after it had already happened.

Maybe adding some past…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Nice! Did you study/read about instances where Christians first talked to unbelievers like your scene above?

@ellette-giselle

Great! That’s a great trope to break.

Ernst is the name of Josef’s son in CR, right?

@ellette-giselle

I just read your latest section. I was struck by how German their names are!😂 And…you created another Ernst?

Haha! I’ve had others complain that the wolves DIDN’T attack! XD.

Then, I’m extremely glad I told you my input. The animals do not have to attack every single time! *shaking head* So unrealistic.

@ellette-giselle

My thoughts on Section 2:

“We don’t believe in the gods of the Empire,” Julian cut in.

There was a stunned silence.

“We worship the One true God,” Julian explained.

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Ju…[Read more]

@esther-c

🥰

@esther-c

500 words or more.

@ellette-giselle

I know.

But the MOST utterly hilarious part is the goat woo!!!!!! When we first heard it, we were utterly shocked. And then we had to repeated that part again…and again…and again…and it is still belly-achingly funny!!!!!!🤣

@ellette-giselle

I’m choking with laughter.

@ellette-giselle

Sometimes love is dunderheaded!”

*gagging at the reference*…

@the_lost-journal

I take German! I invented the quote myself! 😂

Neat! I wanted to learn German for a while…and still do.

@linus-smallprint

I looked it up. The wolf is adorable! But, does he have a name?

@ellette-giselle

Yes! For some reason, I imagined the people of the Empire to be taller…in movies, the Romans are usually taller…

@ellette-giselle

I read the first post from today.

@ellette-giselle

By the way, I still don’t know what to call the people of the Empire! Are they actually called Empirians?

@ellette-giselle

“It will be so strange to be tall again,” Julian grinned.

What does that mean? I’m sure the past two books talk about it…but I didn’t read them as you know.

@the_lost-journal

Oh my gosh!!!!😂 It’s actually true! How did you find that out?

Yes…the story is about an immortal family because they drank this special water…a girl meets one of the brothers and they fall in love. But, she’s not sure about marrying him because he’s immortal…you can look the whole story up.

@the_lost-journal

“If you combine a wolf and the letter “Z” you get the number 12″

What? How does that happen?

@linus-smallprint

I love your new profile picture!!! Did you draw that?

@the_lost-journal

Ah…so her immortality is a curse…that makes it very interesting…

Have you ever heard of “Tuck Everlasting”? You might want to the storyline out for ideas since some of the characters in there are immortal…and problems occur because of that…I’ve never watched the film…I think there’s a book? But I know the storyline.