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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I just read your latest section. I was struck by how German their names are!😂 And…you created another Ernst?
Haha! I’ve had others complain that the wolves DIDN’T attack! XD.
Then, I’m extremely glad I told you my input. The animals do not have to attack every single time! *shaking head* So unrealistic.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
My thoughts on Section 2:
“We don’t believe in the gods of the Empire,” Julian cut in.
There was a stunned silence.
“We worship the One true God,” Julian explained.
I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Ju…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
500 words or more.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I know.
But the MOST utterly hilarious part is the goat woo!!!!!! When we first heard it, we were utterly shocked. And then we had to repeated that part again…and again…and again…and it is still belly-achingly funny!!!!!!🤣
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m choking with laughter.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
I take German! I invented the quote myself! 😂
Neat! I wanted to learn German for a while…and still do.
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Liberty replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
I looked it up. The wolf is adorable! But, does he have a name?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Yes! For some reason, I imagined the people of the Empire to be taller…in movies, the Romans are usually taller…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I read the first post from today.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
By the way, I still don’t know what to call the people of the Empire! Are they actually called Empirians?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
“It will be so strange to be tall again,” Julian grinned.
What does that mean? I’m sure the past two books talk about it…but I didn’t read them as you know.
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Liberty replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh my gosh!!!!😂 It’s actually true! How did you find that out?
Yes…the story is about an immortal family because they drank this special water…a girl meets one of the brothers and they fall in love. But, she’s not sure about marrying him because he’s immortal…you can look the whole story up.
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Liberty replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
“If you combine a wolf and the letter “Z” you get the number 12″
What? How does that happen?
I love your new profile picture!!! Did you draw that?
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Liberty replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
Ah…so her immortality is a curse…that makes it very interesting…
Have you ever heard of “Tuck Everlasting”? You might want to the storyline out for ideas since some of the characters in there are immortal…and problems occur because of that…I’ve never watched the film…I think there’s a book? But I know the storyline.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Woohooooo!!!!!!! *victory dance*
So…you’re introducing a new people culture?
Oh, the romans/germans are called the Empire? Empirians? *cackling*
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
It has to be that. Everything else looks Roman!
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Okay…are you talking about those guys with turbans? They’re not Ardentin…right? Or Roman? (I forgot what those Romans were called…)
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
*gasp* I have to find that hidden odd thing!
Oh…for some reason I thought they were brothers…oh…that makes sense.
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