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R.M. Archer replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
@gracie-j Thanks! ^-^ Congrats on 100k! 😀
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ella replied to the topic One-Sentence Story Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
Two worlds, one light and one dark, collide in the mind of their Keeper: the cat. Â

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ella replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 5 years, 5 months ago
Would your character rather find their true love or a suitcase with five million dollars inside?
Cassie & Isaac both want the money, but they end up with each other 😂 #writershavemorefun
Would your character rather be a slave or the only non-magic user in a magical world?
Would your character rather spend…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Thankfulness as a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
Well, I’m kinda going back to the drawing board over break. I definitely struggle with committing and finishing. 😏
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ella replied to the topic One-Sentence Story Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
@devastate-lasting   Once a year, the sun lines up with the Giving Tree, and once a year, under it’s rustling leaves, a miracle happens. Â

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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
Oh my gosh, that’s impressive!!!!!!!!
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ella replied to the topic Thankfulness as a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
I’m thankful for this great writing community, too!! I’m also thankful for Thanksgiving break, which gives me time to actually write during the school year!!! 😂
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
Oh yeah! I have a space to ramble about my WIP! So I got back into editing Calligraphy Guild (my favorite project in the history of ever)… by procrastinating, of all things… XD But anyway, I worked on the end of a draft to procrastinate on worldbuilding, lol, and then I kept seeing things that just made me think “I NEED TO FINISH CALLIGRAPHY…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
That’s awesome!!
Well, I’m in the idea stage right now, still coming up with cool stuff for two different book ideas:Â fantasy, and thriller/post-apocalyptical. 😊Â The basic premises are a little challenging to come up with now, but I can try:
#1–fantasy:Â The cultures in this are based off of the ancient Viking, Roman, Eg…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
Welcome!! Your story sounds intriguing. 😃 Wow, 65k words! Since it’s on it’s fourth draft, do you think it’ll be finished soon?
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ella replied to the topic My first sci-fi short story(sounds like a photo album, but true:) ) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 5 months ago
<p style=”text-align: left;”>@scoutfinch180</p>
I’m on both forums, so I knew that I would do that, haha!! 😁  Yes, I meant KP, but said SE. -
ella replied to the topic My first sci-fi short story(sounds like a photo album, but true:) ) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 5 months ago
1st section:
1)Â I like the opening sentence 😉
2)Â In the second paragraph, I think it would flow better if you shortened some of the sentences by omitting unnecessary words/details or splitting the sentences into two sentences
3)Â “The loud whirring of the distant, useless generator
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ella replied to the topic My first sci-fi short story(sounds like a photo album, but true:) ) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 5 months ago
Hey!! I was thinking I could look through each post if you wanted me to and proofread each separately (so I don’t write all the changes in one long post). Sound good?
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ella replied to the topic Well, here I am! 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 5 months ago
Hello!! Welcome to KP! I’m Ella and I used to be homeschooled, but now I go to a classical Christian school. I loooovve cats, working out, basketball, listening to music, and writing thriller/suspense/dystopian books. My cat is a brindle named Jasmine and she’s super sassy! 😂
I know everyone’s asked you a lot of questions alr…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 5 years, 5 months ago
Would your character rather be able to have extreme jumping skills or be able to maneuver every maze?
Isa:Â maneuver every maze
Andrew: extreme jumping skills
New question:
Would you rather go on a cruise on the fjords in Norway or go to the Caribbean?
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ella replied to the topic One-Sentence Story Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
As the cat gazed down at the twinkling little lights, everything went quiet–then the world went black.
Next one:

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R.M. Archer replied to the topic Help Plz! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 This is totally unrelated, but I love your signature. XD
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic Help Plz! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
I was going to say the exact same thing Linyang said. XD
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic Who Do You Write Like? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
I also got Agatha Christie. I think it’s biased. XD
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 5 years, 5 months ago
@gracie-j Would your character rather sacrifice themselves for their friend/relative or die for strangers in a dangerous situation?
Ooooh… Duyên would rather sacrifice herself for a friend or relative. So would Raiden. Sairsha and Ryuu would die for strangers. Zen… would probably die for strangers. Tora could go either way, but she’d…[Read more]
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