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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m actually probably getting ready to put up my second chapter for any possible feedback, so I’ll definitely tag you. Thanks for the compliments! I’ve always loved the “halfling” sort of idea and have to be careful not to do that to all of my characters lol. And yeah, I’ve been trying to figure out a way to describe Rina and the setting…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic WIP Question in the forum Historical 1 year, 8 months ago
I’d say that it definitely depends upon the theme you’re trying to convey and the story itself. If the theme is more personal to the MC or POV character, then I’d go for first person. (But then, aren’t all themes personal to the MCs??? 😂 Idk. XD) And it depends on the story. I remember hearing about your WIP and I think you mention…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
I’ve never really finished an entire project. I’m kind of a pantser, and that led to multiple books with over three hundred pages and no direction 🤣. I might try to redeem some of them eventually.
I’ll definitely tag you! I already have the first chapter of my WIP, Healer, in the novel critique section, so feel free to read that if you…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic What makes a character meaningful? in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Thanks for the advice!:)
I agree the nonstereo typical characters are always more lovable, I’ve got a few and I try to make every character have at least one non stereotypical trait.
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Esther posted a new activity comment 1 year, 8 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @acancello @landric @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise
Thank y’all so much for the prayers and encouragement!! 🥰(And @felicity, Star of the North is not my sister. She and Arien are sisters I believe. Easy mistake to make though, because we have a lot of people here on KP. 😉 )
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @acancello @euodia-vision @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @landric @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @thearcanexiom @80strish @kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @keilah-h @janellebelovedpig @sarafini
Hey y’all!
Just a request for prayer. Our family and our church are both going through a lot o…[Read more]-
Oops, messed up your tag, @thearcaneaxiom
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I will be praying! I know how hard church changes can be, God’s still there for you even in the transition. <333
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@esther-c Aww, girl, I’m sorry! I will definitely be praying! ❤️❤️❤️
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@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Thank you so much!! It means a lot!! 🥰❤️
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@esther-c yeah, I know how that feels. We’ll keep you in our prayers, as well as your church and all others who are seeking to do His will, and all those who are simply trying to seek out truth in a confusing world! God loves you with I love you can’t fathom, and He has a plan for you, just keep to the faith you hold fast to!
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*a not I, lol
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I figured. 😉
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Thank you so much!! ❤️
Yes we will!! 😄
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Praying for you all Esther! A few years ago my family made the transition to a new church so I’ll be praying for you out of the things God showed me and my family during that time. ♥
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Thanks so much!! 🥰
It’s nice to know that someone else has gone through the same thing. 😊
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Yes, of course! I understand, we recently went through a similar thing but as long as we are doing our best to follow him, to do His will when called and to love him, he will never overlook us. I’m sure he has great plans for your family! (:
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Yw! <333
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Definitely praying for you, @esther-c!! I know God will use this for good things in your life and your family. Reach out if you need anything!! 🙂
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You’re in my prayers, Esther! (and Star of the North, your sis!) I’ve experienced some church moves and changes in my life and though they are hard and at times very difficult, my dad encouraged me to remember that Jesus never changes and we can always trust Him no matter what happens. May you find peace and stability in Him!
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Of course, Esther! I’ll definitely be praying for you! God’s got you, your family, the previous church, and the new church. =)
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@princesachronicle22 @acancello @landric @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise
Thank y’all so much for the prayers and encouragement!! 🥰(And @felicity, Star of the North is not my sister. She and Arien are sisters I believe. Easy mistake to make though, because we have a lot of people here on KP. 😉 )
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Whoops, sorry about that Esther!
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It’s all good. 🙂 😉
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I’m thankful that through all the changes, God is the same. May He bless y’all on your next adventures for His glory and shower peace with the changes!
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Thanks so much, Janelle!! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic My Villain Needs Some Help in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
So cool that you study Latin! Thanks for the suggestions!! 😀
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Nice to meet you, Landri!
Fantasy is definitely my favorite genre. For some reason, though, I decided to make my main WIP mostly Sci-Fi. Maybe I just felt like trying something new? 🤣
1. I write both novels and short stories, and I really enjoy both. I don’t think I could choose between them! It would have more to do with what they’re…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Pretty Prose, Please! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @felicity @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @kathleenramm @booksbyjayna @keilah-h @loopylin @theloonyone @power @thearcaneaxiom @otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin @landric @gwyndalf-the-wise @whalekeeper
So… I need help.
I’ve noticed that my prose is lac…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @elizabeth-hearten ( @landric are you RPing with us? I can’t remember 😅)
I guess I’ll start. It may just be us three today.
Description: long brown hair, brown eyes, average height. Wearing high-top Converse, jeans, and bright t-shirt underneath an 80s looking jacket (the kind of jacket tha…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @landric @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @loopylin @theloonyone @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @felicity @joy-calle @otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin @thearcaneaxiom @euodia-vision @freedomdreamer @acancello
Ok, y’all… I have an idea…
We can start this character quest…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic My characters need medical advice. in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Thank you so much! That is absolutely wonderful. 🙂
Also, their climate is like a mix of Ireland, Norway, and Northern Israel, so all those are possibilities. The herbs, and especially the recipe, are perfect fuel for ideas. Thanks again!
They might have access to Fantasy Aloe Vera™ but your concern works just as well. :)…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic My characters need medical advice. in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Hi @landric!
Thank you for your advice!
I think I do want it to affect his expressions, but not much. For instance, his smile may be slightly higher and less stiff on the unaffected side, making his grin a touch lopsided. The brand itself is roughly 1 1/2″ -2″ long and 1″ wide. I do think it would follow his cheekbone.
Yay! Any specific herbs?
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Elishavet Elroi started the topic My characters need medical advice. in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Do they? Yes they do. Unfortunately, I don’t know what to give them. So, IÂ need some advice.
First, I have this idea for a new character. He has no name yet he’s that new. What I do know about him is that he’s about twelve years old and a slave to a soldier. He has seen many horrible things, including being forced to fight in battles against his…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@felicity @otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin @whalekeeper @sarafini @charityanne @landric @elizabeth-hearten @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c
So can I ask who is in the Monday group so I know who to tag?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@otherworldyhistorian Nice character!
@whalekeeper Chickens, yay! No guarantee Howzer won’t try to eat your chicken though……. (I’ll make sure he doesn’t.)
Speaking of which, I have a drawing of him. It’s not that great, but it’ll give you an idea of what he looks like:
He can stand on two legs or on four, but since I’m not sure how large…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic âš” The Great Word Winding Tournament âš” in the forum Poetry 1 year, 9 months ago
@elanor @ava-blue @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @emilysf @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @princesachronicle22 @euodia-vision @sarafini @mineralizedwritings @landric @elizabeth-hearten @orielle21 @anyone_else_interested_in_a_$5_Amazon_giftcard
6 days until the end of the Great Word Winding Tournament!
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@felicity @otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin @whalekeeper @sarafini @charityanne @landric @elizabeth-hearten @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c
*Bursts into discussion room*
Why hello there everyone! Sorry I haven’t been on the last couple day’s, but I’m excited to lock ourselves into this library!
You can just call me Prin, and use my…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Hi everybody! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 9 months ago
I love all the Anne books that its so hard to decide which one is my favorite! Each one is so amazing and so full of description and life like characters and each character feels like a friend when your reading them. I’m re-reading the whole series again and i’m on the last one “Rilla of Ingleside”. Usually I don’t cry ever during books,…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Hi everybody! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 9 months ago
Thanks for the questions! I like listening to pretty much every type of music. Favorite books are Anne of green gables and Harry Potter, but there always changing because I read so much! My dream career is to be a mom of 8. I think it would be so much fun to have a full house of kids and a huge family! Thanks again!
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Whoops, sorry about that Esther!
It’s all good. 🙂 😉