LandriC

Heheh forgot the tags 😅🤣

@thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise @landric @anyone

@landric

Of course! =D

Also if you decide to post more of it, regardless of whether or not you want suggestions, I’d love to read it!

@landric Awesome! I hope to see more in the future 🙂

@landric

You’re so welcome!! I’m glad I could help! 😊

@landric

Sounds good! 🙂

Now for the board! I’ve never actually made one of these so idk how good it is 🫣 

Oh and some tags

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c @awsumfaith @janellebelovedpig @acancello @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12 @landric @anyone-else

@landric

I actually just got the part where Emma is introduced! I think she may end up being my favorite. 😉

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, it’s cool, but such hard work…😅😂

Lol, I can imagine. XD

Glad to hear you’re doing well!!! I’ve been doing really well lately, actually, so thanks for asking!!! 🥰🥰🥰

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Awesome!! Of course! 😄

Also, so cool that yo…

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@landric

I love this!! And girl, you are great at description!! I could picture everything so perfectly!! 😄👏 Wonderful job!

There are a few things I would tweak though.

Together they raced up another flight of stairs, feeling their way in the dark, flying around corners (Emma lost her shoes around the third one) in search of an open door.

So,…[Read more]

@landric

Girl, no kidding, I’m smiling so much right now. 😄😊 You’re so sweet!! 🥰 Your feedback is super encouraging. ☺️

Also…THEIR. NAMES. I’m a sucker for perfect character names and I loved theirs!! So gloriously Annerian….

For real!! I was so happy when I found these names. Plus, they have meaning, which I always love. 😏 Amatus means “beloved.…[Read more]

@landric Oh goodness I love this so much. I can totally see the story and the whole aesthetic come to life!! Totally didn’t see the spy twist coming but it was superb. Gosh no, don’t you dare scrap this story, I want to see more! However, I do agree with @kyronthearcanin I think separate stories is the way to go. Who knows, you might be able to…[Read more]

@landric

Definitely do not scrap it!!! 😅🤣 It’s way too good to scrap. Use it in something, make it its own something, but just don’t get rid of it. You never know when you might use it.

Hmmm… I think maybe do them separately? I like the characters and think it would be good to see more of them. If you did it all in one, it would be strange to…[Read more]

@landric

Ahh!!!! 😆 Thank you so much!!! 🥰

That means a lot, especially knowing that my prose was spot on, cuz that’s big struggle of mine. 😅😊😄

@landric

Oooooh I love this!!! 😃😃

I agree with @gwyndalf-the-wise I would love to read more, even as just a larger short story.

Unfortunately, I cannot think of any critiques to give right now, other than Will wasn’t capitalized once. 😅 I really love the story! It feels so real.

@landric

Ooo I like it! Wasn’t expecting it to be a spy story, that was a nice twist. XD that could just be my love of spy stories/mysteries coming out though

Is this all you have or are you releasing it in snippets? *really wants to read more*

“Are you ready, Will?” She whispered so only her could hear.

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@landric

Thanks so much! I was hoping the healing was at least somewhat realistic, but all I know comes from watching random vet shows… I’m glad you could picture everything well! That’s something I’ve been working on a lot recently, so it helps to know someone can. 😅🤣

@landric

WHOA, you’re in the middle of all my favorites!

Lol, that’s awesome!

God of the Garden is fantastic. Do you have a favorite Green Ember character??

I’ve only read through like chapter 2, and I’m enjoying it so far! 😀

Hm… idk. Maybe Heather? I’m not entirely sure. XD

Also, please tag me to rant about Ranger’s Apprentice. It’s phenomen…

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@freedomwriter76

Hey!! I’m still on, but only for a few more minutes. 🙂

Doing pretty good! Wbu?

Oooh, cool! XD

@landric

I’m almost in high school. I’ll be a freshman for the 2023-24 school year. 😉

I’m in the middle of rereading the Wingfeather Saga! Rn I’m in the middle of book two. I’m also reading God of the Garden by Andrew Peterson. F…[Read more]

@landric

Also, random question: how do y’all get those signatures on your post? You know, the part under the line? I can’t figure out how to add one… hi, I’m a dunce at technology 😉

So, you should find it when you go to edit your profile. There should be a box where you can put it. 🙂

Naw, you’re good. 😁

My writing’s been good! To be honest, I ha…

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