LandriC

Sometimes you gotta feel it out.

Oh and just to clarify, the words that I suggested should be taken out shouldn’t be taken out every time they’re in your prose. It’s just a good rule of thumb to follow, not some law. Just wanted to make that clear. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

I was just about to ask how you were doing when I saw this in my inbox! Glad you’re back!!

Um, I don’t think so. It’s a new day though.

@liberty

Um, I don’t think so. I believe I was just pointing out some wording that I felt was a little awkward. My suggestion was a way to word it differently so that it would be smoother to read. As for the describing the forest, you could tap into his emotions a little bit then, but that wasn’t exactly what I was pointing out. I was just sug…[Read more]

@loopylin

Yessss, awesome idea!! love it 😎 And it will always give our charries something to do if the RP slows for a little bit. XD

@whalekeeper @jonas @rae @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Alright, gonna RP for two more charries real quick. Feel free to have your character interact with them or totally ignore them. 😛

Hallie 

“Are you sure my hair looks okay?”

“Hallie, it looks fine.”

She turned away from the window and narrowed her eyes at her brother.…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Everton 

“Woah, what the— Oh…” Ev pushed a hand through his hair and looked at the boy he had run into. “Tony right?”

Sorry it’s so short. I wasn’t sure if Tony would just give a simple answer or not. 🙃

@freed_and_redeemed

Yeah, let’s do it! You can RP first though cuz I was just hopping on to answer your question. I don’t have time to RP atm. 😛

Oh good, it posted. KP was acting weird for a bit and I was afraid it hadn’t posted. 😬

@liberty

Alrighty, let’s do this.

I’m not in any way the most amazing writer or editor ever, so I recommend to take my advice with a grain of salt. 😉

Brightening the somewhat pale sky, the golden sun streamed beams of light all about

Ok, the first thing I noticed was the word ‘somewhat.’ In most cases, you can always cut this from narrati…[Read more]

@rae

Ooh, that’s an interesting idea… If you want to, I say go for it!

@freed_and_redeemed

For real though, I would do the same thing. 😂 I’ve imagined the moment I get to hold my very own book in my hands and now you are so close to that!!🥹😆

@liberty

ooh, that’s so exciting!! I’ve been wanting to try my hand at some contests this year as well.

So I read it through once, but I don’t have the time rn to give you some feedback. I’ll be sure to get to it later today though!

*happy dance*

@freed_and_redeemed

Ahhh!!!! I’m so excitedddd!!! 😆✨

@freed_and_redeemed

For sure!! 😄

@lightoverdarkness6

Aww, thanks so muchhh!!!

I totally forgot about this topic and I will return later today with more chapters 🤭

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok, so that sounds AWESOME!!!

I’m going to have to find that and watch it!!

@freed_and_redeemed

C L I N T!!! What are you DoINg?!?!

The poor boiii 🥺

Ok, I might RP Ami’s reaction later today.

Wait—

Oh my goodness, I just realized that the last time I had rped her she was in her dorm talking with Ellie! Ahh!! She was in two places at once. 🤣 My bad 😅

@smiley

Ok! You’re totally fine. (: I’ll figure somethin’ out 😉