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@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone

Here’s the next section on Jade. It’s sort of small.

Jade wrapped her cloak tighter around herself, shivering in the bitter wind. The trip to Brekya would be a long one, but it seemed necessary. Dragon scouts were there, dragons that had used some kind of ma…[Read more]

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c

Idk how often we’re circling back, but here:

The girl’s hands flew to her hips and she skewered me with her glare. “Why do you, a complete stranger, need to know my business? Isn’t that kind of nosy?”

I shrugged. “Maybe. Let’s just start with your name, t…[Read more]

@acancello I do!! Poetry is such a fun genre to explore, not to mention it’s satisfying to write something short you can actually finish… unlike my novel WIP… 😂 Here’s one of my really short poems where I experimented with spacing and condensation of thought through metaphor.

Dandelions

Embodiment of

Dreams

S c a t t e r e d

With…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I like the wings! And the webbed hands are cool.

@thearcaneaxiom

Somewhat, I guess. At first I wasn’t sure who would be who, so it kind of just happened. But the main idea of the shifter thing is not like a shape-shifter, but of her ability to shift reality in someone’s mind. Her eyes change when she’s doing it, making them appear more dragon-like, at least in color.

Ooo how fun!! Mind if I join 👀

(I vote for a boy charrie too btw)

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I drop my gaze from hers. “I, um… well… I wanted to know your secret.”

She pushed her face closer to mine, her sea-green eyes staring at me suspiciously. “How did you know I had a secret?”

I shrug. “‘Cause you acted like it.”

Judging by the way she scrunched her…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig Helloooo! *waves* It’s a pleasure to meet you and read this gorgeous work of poetry! I love the use of slant rhyme, it’s so perfect for this piece; it sounds like a literal psalm from the Bible! Oo you’re writing an allegory?? Coolio, me too!!

As for a few words on poetry punctuation, I would say that it’s not always necessary…[Read more]

@esther-c Of course, I’m glad I could say something useful!

@keilah-h

He sounds cool!!!

@janellebelovedpig

Yw!!

Oooh, awesome!! 😀

@starshiness

Thanks!!! 😄😊

Oh ok, that’s a really good point. That’s a really good idea. Thanks for the help! 😀

@esther-c @light-warrior-pen

Bravo! 😅🤣

Idk how often we’re supposed to write, but here’s Eclipse again.

Eclipse walked down the hallway, focusing on the flames in the torches. If he was judging them right, he should be going straight to the… Well, in one direction. He wasn’t sure which.

Azar’s excitement was making Eclipse nervous. Stop…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oh my goodness this was so beautiful, so sad but so well-written!! Augh, what a tender, beautiful couple, that hurt when I realized she died 😭. I haven’t read the Wingfeather Saga (not yet at least!) so I was glad this didn’t need any background knowledge.

The only critique I might offer would be this: during Meira’s internal struggle…[Read more]

@kyronarcanin

Yes, I agree, awesome cliffhanger! Can’t wait to see what happens next! 😀

@freedomwriter76

Alright!

Talk to ya later!! 😀

@janellebelovedpig

Here are my ideas for punctuation. I put them all in bold.

The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever,

Desirable far beyond refined gold.

Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether,

Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb.

Turning simple to wise,

Righteous, rejoicing the heart,

Purely, the light of my eyes,

Cleansing…

[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I liked the long RP! 😁

Thx!

Ev

Ev grinned at Tony and Sam’s messing around. But he seriously considered Tony’s offer to help in math and science. Those were his weakest subjects. And if he wanted his father to be pleased, then maybe some help would be needed…

No. He wouldn’t mention anything about it… for now. He’d do just fin…[Read more]

@loopylin

Here it is!

(It is really weird for me to get used to using his first name because all my charries call him by his last name. 😂)

Derek Len

Derek eyes the two people in front of him warily. One was a girl who was the height of a child, and the other was a man probably a foot taller than Derek.

The girl smiled sweetly up at Derek.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Exactly! Forgiveness is so important.

Janus! 😬 Oh boy.

And Ridley. I feel so bad for him! 😭 (Especially after reading his RP.) I’m glad he gets redeemed. 🙂

But I also feel so bad for Lyn. Poor girl. 😭

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NoVeMbEr?!?!?!

WhAt?!

I must know more!!!

@awsumfaith

Thanks! 🙂