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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
GASP I love that so much!!! I like dystopian stories in general but that’s just awesome. I love the names too!
Yep, I’ve posted my WIP Healer. (I will keep my rant as short as possible XD) So, there are five races- the Lupinari (based off wolves), Arcanin (based off bears; they have magic, symbolized by the stars on their…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Random thing, while I’m thinking about it…
For Healer, (and for the series I’m hoping to make out of it) I’m doing a POV from first-person present. It’s been different, because I usually write in past tense. I was trying to think of a way to add that style into this fantasy world.
So… My idea was, a story collection from this…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Ahaha! Maybe that’s the real trick of relationships in a story… Not exactly being all sappy, but making people smile. (lol perfectly worded I’m so trademarking that XDXD)
Yes! We are Hybridlore and Solfyre, the weird pantser duo! 🤣🤣 I might’ve mentioned this before but I love your username. Lol part of the reason I used Solfyre as…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Ooooh I should draw them together XDXD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
XDXD
Right!? lol
Lol my brainstorming process is all over the place rn. She would be another soldier helping them in their mission to free the prisoners. I always call her Naria in my head, because I randomly thought of that name and wasn’t sure where to use it (I know it sounds like Narnia but whatever XD). I picture her with dark…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Yes, definitely! XD
Same! My brother always rolls his eyes at me. Whenever I’m writing a scene I like I just end up grinning for what seems like no reason lol.
Also… I’ve thought about having a love interest for Sorren. What do you think about that? It would be another Lupinari, because we can’t have everyone become halflings XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Any Ideas? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 6 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Cliffhangers are now the best proven method of motivation XD
And yes! Now Dune and Rina have to be a thing lol. One thing: I now have to learn how to write relationships… Eventually. Maybe. We’ll see XD
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Starshiness replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@smiley I’m down! Might not last the entire hour but I’ll be here for a while 🙂
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Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Okay soooo fyi… any of y’all who have yet to read the story… ignore the first post and read this one instead, I am now cringing so hard at some of the paragraphs in there and want to purge myself completely of them XD. I also reformatted the chapters… Let’s just say today was a big edit day for RQ anddd I did not realize that until now lol.…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Any Ideas? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 6 months ago
Interesting thing. The username Solfyre is based off of a couple characters. Sol is a dragon in my WIP Finding the Light. Fyre is the guardian of another realm they have to journey to in the book.
The tag KyrontheArcanin is a character in Healer, too, but to tell you who he is would be a MAJOR spoiler, so I’ll hold back XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Yes, absolutely tag me! *rushes to look at poetry * XD
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Starshiness replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
@crocheter12 Really! That’s super cool, does this anthology have a theme? 👀 I’ve been wanting to publish in an anthology as well but haven’t been aware of any open ones. Aw thanks for the encouragement!
@kyronthearcanin XD stalk away my friend, we all do it lollll. Aww thanks so much! I’ve posted a little bit on the poetry topic and I have a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Any Ideas? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 6 months ago
I’ve written backstory and stuff before, but I can’t say I’ve done much writing ahead. IÂ know I haven’t done any in Healer, because it would probably help.
So… I’ll definitely have to try that. 😉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, I didn’t get an email for yours either. But then again, KP has been kind of weird lately XD
Thanks so much!!! I was actually kind of worried about this chapter, so that’s awesome!
Lol I think cliffhangers are my way of forcing myself to write the next chapter, because even I want to know what happens next. XD the motivation of…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Oooh the fairy tales made modern one looks cool, too… I love twists on fairy tales, but I’ve never tried them myself.
(I’ll admit, I’ve never read any Shakespeare, but the book about Mary looks cool too 🙂)
*after stalking XD* From what I’ve seen of your writing, I bet your poetry is/would be great! I don’t know…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@keilah-h Awesome, thx! Yea no worries, take your time, there’s a lot there and more to come still lol.
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Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 XDXD I meant there’s worse to come lolllll
I died laughingggg lolll it was just your choice of using that term to avoid saying his name that for some reason was so funny to me XDXD
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Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Y’all…. I feel like this is just a representation of my success rates with editing… right after I post this chapter I decide to overhaul a section of it and make it flow so much better, but ofc it’s only AFTER I’ve posted this XD
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Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@acancello Thank you so much!! <3
@kyronthearcanin Ahhhh thank youuuuu! Really!! I’m so glad, I know it gets choppy in some later chapters and it’s so hard to properly evaluate your own writing when you’ve seen it and read it over so many times. Ooh ok ok I won’t spill the beans 🤫🤐
@freedomwriter76 OMW REALLY ALREADY?!?!!! Girl you ain’t seen…[Read more]
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