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@grcr

👍 Ill work on them now!

@savannah_grace2009

Great! 🙂

@freedomwriter76

Hes like… How do you describe it…? Needs to be loved? I feel so bad for him, Lol XD

@everyone

Does anyone want to see some of my characters storys? If I have time I’ll post them later.

@freedomwriter76

(Just going to pop in and tell you..) Ahhh!!! I looove Erich 😍 💗 😭I love all your characters though… but he seems different..

@savannah_grace2009

Oh! Poor Ottoline…I love her story though, its well detailed! Hugos story is sorta similar , if I have time I’ll share it today 🙂

@autumnlily

I am also naming the chapters of my WIP, I feel like it helps readers keep track of everything. It is a bit tricky to come up with a good name, I really like it when the name vaguely hints about what happens and one that dosent spoil anything. Theres a good in between, like you dont want to name one “This character died.” Instead, be…[Read more]

I’ll try to RP for my charries today 🙂

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76

Yeah, I’m fine with that! It’d be helpful if you could write a RP for Clint tho, Freedom. 😅 Cuz I don’t know where to start with my characters. XD

@beth-torres

Hi! Don’t worry about the late, response, it’t totally fine 🙂

Lets see… The weirdest food I tried would probably have to be a scorpion (It was in a lollypop) It honestly tasted like chicken, lol! What is yours?

I looove the Harry Potters, but my new favorite book is *dun-dun-dun* “The Westing game” By Ellen Raskin. It keeps…[Read more]

@euodia-vision (literally almost tagged myself 🤦🏻‍♀️😂)

Ok! Thanks!!

@esther-c

Woah, I will check that out!

And I think most if not all offer cash/monetary prizes. 👀😂

@EVERYONE (I’d tag everyone I’ve interacted with on KP, but that’s a lot of people. XD)

Hey everyone!

So Jerry Jenkins (an incredible author if you didn’t know 😉 ) has an article with tons of different writing contests in 2024. I’m definitely planning to thoroughly look through all of them at some point, because I want to start submittin…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @rae @mineralizedwritings

Thanks you so much guys!! All your advice has helped so much! I feel much more confident about editing this chapter now. ❤️

(And Rae, I would never get rid of the donut scene EVER. I love it too. 🥰😁)

@grcr

It is hard to say much without knowing much of your book, but I do agree with what Sara said as far as openings…

Ok! If you do wanna read the chapter, I posted it like two posts above this one.

I guess it depends on the reader, but personally, I like books that paint some of the picture in the first (and even second) chapter… even if it seem…

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@savannah_grace2009

Ugh, sorry you’re going through that! That’s hard!

Yeah, thanks. XD My NaNo WIP feels so much easier because it’s so new, lol.

Could you maybe post some segments of it so I can see more of what you mean?

I posted the first chapter in the post above this one.

All I can say is that maybe you’re focusing a little too much on all…

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@rae

What’s the first paragraph of your book?

So, the first paragraph doesn’t have much info in it since it’s only a few lines, but I’ll share the original first chapter so you can see what I’m talking about. (Hopefully. XD) In a day or two, I’m hoping to have an alternate first chapter written, so I may share that just to see if y’all think…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oof, those are hard questions. For the first one, I get what you mean. I think for the first chapter, an introduction is fine. Personally, I would try to focus on the relationship between Ami and Ev, and his family conflict, because I think that will hook the reader.

Yes, definitely. XDXD

Ok, yeah. I think I already have a few ideas…[Read more]

@jonas

I think adding villains would be cool (if you have already made the decision, that fine) I wont be adding another person, I wont be RPing to much either (I know I dont now 🙂 but I dont think I’ll be  active on KP to much, I’m getting pretty busy) Thanks for asking!

I’d love some help if you guys have any tips or advice to contribute 👆😊

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @hybridlore @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @euodia-vision @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae @thearcaneaxiom @anyone-else!