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@esther-c

I don’t mind at all! Better for you to start it off than me. 🤣

If Azar had been in control, Eclipse was sure he’d be jumping up and down. Well, don’t just stand there! the spirit commanded. Say something! Honestly, you’re terrible. I should have picked Lumeo instead.

Humans, Eclipse thought with a sigh. Of all creatures...

The gi…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Poor November!!! 😭😭 They do forgive him in the end… right?? 😢

@loopylin

Alright. 🙂

Derek

“Nice to meet you, Derek!” Madeline said enthusiastically. “I’m sure we’ll soon be best friends.”

Derek nodded, keeping his forced smile. He glanced over at the tall man. But maybe you and I won’t be great friends, he thought.

“Oh, that’s just Sam,” Madeline explained. “Don’t mind him. He doesn’t talk anymore. But…[Read more]

@elanor Thank you!! Your poem is beautiful as well; what a joy to be inspired by the attributes of our God and create poetry from it in our meditations!

@janellebelovedpig Thanks! 😊 Well kinda! I’ve never had to lose someone close to me or have a friend who had to “fight to live” in that sense, but the prompt this grew from was “give someone a…[Read more]

@felicity@starshiness@elanor

Those are all amazing! They each are so beautiful and they paint a picture and are meaningful! If you have any more, please share! 🙂

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @awsumfaith @anyone

Here’s the next section on Jade. It’s sort of small.

Jade wrapped her cloak tighter around herself, shivering in the bitter wind. The trip to Brekya would be a long one, but it seemed necessary. Dragon scouts were there, dragons that had used some kind of ma…[Read more]

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c

Idk how often we’re circling back, but here:

The girl’s hands flew to her hips and she skewered me with her glare. “Why do you, a complete stranger, need to know my business? Isn’t that kind of nosy?”

I shrugged. “Maybe. Let’s just start with your name, t…[Read more]

@acancello I do!! Poetry is such a fun genre to explore, not to mention it’s satisfying to write something short you can actually finish… unlike my novel WIP… 😂 Here’s one of my really short poems where I experimented with spacing and condensation of thought through metaphor.

Dandelions

Embodiment of

Dreams

S c a t t e r e d

With…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I like the wings! And the webbed hands are cool.

@thearcaneaxiom

Somewhat, I guess. At first I wasn’t sure who would be who, so it kind of just happened. But the main idea of the shifter thing is not like a shape-shifter, but of her ability to shift reality in someone’s mind. Her eyes change when she’s doing it, making them appear more dragon-like, at least in color.

Ooo how fun!! Mind if I join 👀

(I vote for a boy charrie too btw)

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I drop my gaze from hers. “I, um… well… I wanted to know your secret.”

She pushed her face closer to mine, her sea-green eyes staring at me suspiciously. “How did you know I had a secret?”

I shrug. “‘Cause you acted like it.”

Judging by the way she scrunched her…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig Helloooo! *waves* It’s a pleasure to meet you and read this gorgeous work of poetry! I love the use of slant rhyme, it’s so perfect for this piece; it sounds like a literal psalm from the Bible! Oo you’re writing an allegory?? Coolio, me too!!

As for a few words on poetry punctuation, I would say that it’s not always necessary…[Read more]

@esther-c Of course, I’m glad I could say something useful!

@keilah-h

He sounds cool!!!

@janellebelovedpig

Yw!!

Oooh, awesome!! 😀

@starshiness

Thanks!!! 😄😊

Oh ok, that’s a really good point. That’s a really good idea. Thanks for the help! 😀

@esther-c @light-warrior-pen

Bravo! 😅🤣

Idk how often we’re supposed to write, but here’s Eclipse again.

Eclipse walked down the hallway, focusing on the flames in the torches. If he was judging them right, he should be going straight to the… Well, in one direction. He wasn’t sure which.

Azar’s excitement was making Eclipse nervous. Stop…[Read more]

@esther-c

Oh my goodness this was so beautiful, so sad but so well-written!! Augh, what a tender, beautiful couple, that hurt when I realized she died 😭. I haven’t read the Wingfeather Saga (not yet at least!) so I was glad this didn’t need any background knowledge.

The only critique I might offer would be this: during Meira’s internal struggle…[Read more]

@kyronarcanin

Yes, I agree, awesome cliffhanger! Can’t wait to see what happens next! 😀