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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
@kyronthearcanin Yeah, Artham is awesome. I traced the picture of him that was in the book and digitally colored it once.
Here’s some dragon-person art!

This guy is stretching like a cat. He’s one of several main characters in my fifteen-book fanfiction, so I draw him a lot.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@kyronthearcanin Thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
@kyronthearcanin I WANT TO READ THAT SO BAD NOW. IT SOUNDS AWESOME!
Also, yes, in response to your earlier questions. Dragons are undeniably awesome, and snakes are cool. If you’d like I can show you a picture of some!
Oh, and the Wingfeather Saga’s twisted creatures are called cloven. Some of them are actually kinda cool if you ask me.
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Esther replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Oooooh I love that! They definitely seem like a good match. Poor Ev ☹️
Thanks!! 😊
Yes, they are!! 🥰
I know. 😢 But don’t worry, eventually he comes to the truth. (After a long journey, lots of impulsive decisions, someone else’s redemption, Ami’s encouragement and prayer, and a few near-death experiences, though. XD)…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
This is Amidala! (or just Ami). She’s really sweet but can be sassy. 😉 She’s the one who reminds Ev that he is not a failure. (Because Ev thinks he is because of how his parents treat him. Though he doesn’t try to act like it. 😢) Her struggle is trusting God all the time and relying on Him, instead of relying on herself, those…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
@kyronthearcanin I love that character design!
I’m Keilah, by the way. Here are a couple questions that I hope no one has asked yet:
- Ever written a fanfiction? If so, what was it about?
- What are your opinions on reptiles?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks! Yeah, I’m kinda all over the place honestly when it comes to worldbuilding. I either just worldbuild on and on, but I need to just sit down and write sometimes.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
I’ll mention four of my favorite characters so far.
Tailen
Though I’ve been talking about Omialia this whole time, Tailen is actually from the peak end of the first era (appears more sci fi), which was a lot more earthlike, as it was an actually solid, spherical ‘planet’. We first meet him when he is pulled into 4 dimensional…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
There was a war, in which the Lupinari and the Serpenree nearly wiped each other out. It was before Dragor became king of the Serpenree, so he himself never actually agreed to it, and probably never would have. The council, anticipating that someday another ruler would try to take over, made the four-planet rule.
So the council…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Ok, sweet, so in that case I’ll get into mostly Omialian cultures (Omialia is the 3rd of 7 eras of my world) because it’s the most developed, then I’ll get into some of my favorite characters separately.
Before we get into what the cultures are like, we must get into what Omialia actually is. Imagen a space of closely clustered…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Alright, so for the legal system, there is what they call the Orythian Council (Orythia is most likely going to be their solar system). It is made up of two representatives from each kingdom on every planet. They usually decide the laws, though they have to be approved by at least four planets to go through. I can try to answer…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Also, wish me luck! I’ll be gone from one to three playing music for the school I used to go to. 🙂
Good Luck!
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Esther replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
We don’t have a lot of forests where I live. We’re kind of just surrounded by farmers’ fields, so I guess I’ll have to find somewhere that does. Oooh… What about a forest in the mountains? That would be perfect! 😄
Same here. Suburbs, cities, and farmland. XD
Yes!! It would be!! Our family visited Colorado I think 2 summers ago…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
1. Any other country… Good question! I’m going to have to go with Israel, I think? Because I would get to see some of the places where Jesus walked!
That would be so cool!! I used to really want to visit Israel (and I still do), but I really want to visit Ireland/Northern Ireland now because of the scenery and the accents. &#x…[Read more]
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic Does anyone else like to write song spoofs? in the forum Music 3 years, 1 month ago
@kyronthearcanin
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
There is a group that decides what is and isn’t legal. I’ll get back to you later, because I have some schoolwork to get done lol. I agree that it is very optimistic, and I’m probably going to work on a better system, too.
Sounds good! Good luck on your school work!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
For your first point, that makes a lot of sense, and I’ll look into it.
Sounds good!
Second, yes, there are earth-like creatures in my world, but I think I’m going to add twists to some of them (not quite sure what that means yet lol). Rina, though she can’t remember the name, used to live in a town called Winterknoll, on her h…
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Sure! I really like Isaiah 45: 18-19, and Jeremiah 29:11-13.
I’ll tell you about my WIPs tomorrow, I’m just replying now so that you know I’m not ignoring youand so I don’t forget. =) -
Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
now I understand your tag, mwahahahaOOOO I really, really like this! Your writing style is fun to read and I like Rina and Quelin’s relationship, XD That’s probably my favorite part.
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