Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@freedomwriter76 @orielle21 @landric @kyronthearcanin @anyone else who tagged me in the last couple of days that I missed

I haven’t gotten caught up on notifs so if I haven’t responded to you this is why, sorry about that! I’ll try to get back to y’all within the week…and I know some of you sent me story snippets or chapters (which YAY that’ll…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Nice job on your chapter two! (I’m super invested now, by the way. I’d totally already be on chapter fifteen if this was published. XD)

Okay, a couple of things that are jumping out at me on my first read-through…

1. I think you could use a bit more battle description. Maybe I got lost somewhere, but exactly what started this…

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This is great!! It hits close to home for me; as a nursing student, almost all of my fantasy/sci-fi characters are medics and healers. (I know, I know, strange mashup of reality and fantasy 🙂

First off, I loved your characters and explanations of races/kinds. Everything made sense to me in that regard. Plus, I’m a sucker for…[Read more]

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(I was never arguing for complete evolution. God clearly made Humans separate from other animals and on the different days of creation made specific types of creatures.  I am saying that I think it likely that during Noah’s time there were less animals (and that it is possible these were only ancestor animals of stuff around to…[Read more]

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( I have not been to Ark Encounter but my grandparents have.

For the question of Noah’s ark (and getting the animals inside), I would personally use evolution to explain it (I feel like evolution gets a bad rap because some people take evolution too far and try to use it to explain away God. If you think about it though it…[Read more]

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I like novellas too! I’ve finished two novellas and a novel, so I’m not exactly sure which are my favorite.

I think you have good sense on the sequel debate. I, for one, love sequels, but I really hate BAD sequels, if you know what I mean. Sometimes, you’ve really said everything you need to say about certain characters, and the…[Read more]

Godly I can’t tell if the second part of it means to tell the arcs of the characters other people mention of yours or the ones that you yourself liked…so I’ll do ones that other people mention unless you specify it’s the other cause I got a lot.

Soooo: ARCS

Luca: His is positive. He learns to be less…scared of abandonment.

Derek: His is…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Has God not worked through our free will since forever?

Indeed, has not God known everything since eternity past?

Is this not the true art of answer within a question? Is this the true way? Would God not approve such skilled use of questions?

Are questions dangerous in any way? There is a skill and art to everything, but can it…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Are such question-statements allowed in your little Statemency?

One must police oneself. I propose that they be kept to a minimum, in favor of firm, decisive speech.

In any case, a question-statement is less of a question, and more of a tone-setter. Something such as “How dare you.” needs no answer.

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*Gasps of horror and internal doubt*

Errmmm, you still cannot destroy the Statmency…

Hello @kyronthearcanin!

I’m Landri, and I’m a homeschool graduate in nursing school right now 😉 I write and read fantasy! I also enjoy historical fiction and medical history/fiction (hence my chosen career.) I’ve written a WIP with my co-writer, who you can also find on KP.

Questions!

1. Do you prefer novels or short stories?

2. How many…[Read more]

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Wow, thank you all so much!

@kyronthearcanin Yes, amen! Actually taking our requests to God and listening for His answers. I have seen time and time again how He’s faithful to answer. That’s how I’m at the job I am right now and that’s how I’m going to be at my future job. What gives me encouragement, especially whenever I can’t hear Him, is that…[Read more]

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Perhaps both? 🤣🤣

(Only some days! 🤣🤣🤣)

@kyronthearcanin

(Possibly! But I choose exclamations because they are fun to use!!!)

(In all seriousness, this is hilarious, putting exclamation points after all of my sentences. 😂🤣 It looks like I’m either really mad or really excited. 🤣🤣)

@kyronthearcanin

Your story sounds really interesting! It’s cool showing the amount of power that just a story can hold.

My short story was about my character, Milo, who is addicted to a life-simulation game. In the story, he met Cammie (who also used the game, but Milo didn’t know in the short story) and the end had a very vague ending of him…[Read more]