@kyronthearcanin
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@kyronthearcanin @janellebelovedpig @godlyfantasy12 @starshiness @mineralizedwritings
Oooooh! This story is getting really good! I dont know how to add on though…. Does anyone else? Here it is so far!
One bright sunny day, I watched a girl leap over a rotten log and land with a splash in a muddy puddle. She was beautiful,daring and braver tha…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @loopylin
Derek
“How long have you been here?” Ridley finally asked after a slight awkward pause.
Derek tilted his head to the side and shrugged. “Just a little bit. An hour at the most.”
Ridley nodded.
The two were silent once again. For some reason, Derek was having a hard time being his friendl…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@kyronthearcanin I like the chapters so far!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah, that makes sense. Again, I like it because it does drive the plot, but it would be good for the characters to recognize their mistakes. It would make sense for Dune, because of his anger and frustration with Korwin, and Rina makes sense, I just wasn’t sure if you were meaning for her to actually be correct in her…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @esther-c
Rampart
“So, you’re an admiral? Don’t you need to be getting back to your fleet or something?” The wolflike creature walked up to him.
“I should be.” Rampart hissed, his tail lashing. “Although there are other dragons who’ll take care of my job for now.”
More like take over my job for me..…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Sorry I took so long to finally take the time to read this.
Chapter 4 Looks good, but a few things:
The way your referring to time on Lacertillia is very confusing, as it doesn’t seem to regard it as a planet orbiting a sun. There would be no peak point for the sun to rise, that’s only meaningful on a local scale on the planet,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @loopylin
Ridley
The older man was stepping over to him. Ridley’s chest thumped.
He averted his gaze from the large wound that stuck from the man’s chest, the one only he could see.
He could only pray the ability would subside in a few moments…
“You said your name’s Ridley?”
Ridley nodded obediently.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@kyronthearcanin He can’t breathe fire. Some of his scales light up though, and he can breathe underwater (think SeaWing from Wings of Fire, that’s what his kind is based off of)
@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @esther-c
Rampart
The little girl–Madeline?–hopped away from Ridley…
…and toward him.
“Hello!” she chirped. “I don’t mean to be rud…[Read more]
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LandriC replied to the topic Anyone have Spotify? in the forum Music 1 year, 7 months ago
Hey! I’m on if we want to try the link again XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Ridley’s powers are so cool! That was really fun to read, and it fit Maddie and Sam perfectly. (poor Sam)
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Madeline
Madeline skipped cheerfully away from Ridley. The boy was interesting – he had pretty eyes – but she was currently much more interested in the giant winged man who stood abo…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @esther-c @kyronthearcanin
Rampart
Rampart introduced himself and Ridley. “Well, nice to meet you,” said the wolflike creature. “Do you live here? Or were you just randomly here like us? I must say, if you live here, I like the style.”
Did he seriously think that? “No, we don’t live here.” Rampart growled…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @esther-c @kyronthearcanin
Sorry! I’m here! Lol!
Ridley
Ridley’s eyes widened slightly at the rather strange sight before him, though it didn’t strike him quite as odd as it might some.
The most curious thing was the smoking wolf that stood before them-or at least Ridley assumed it was a wolf as that was what the form appea…[Read more]
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Faith replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Love theseeeeee keep em coming! XD
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LandriC replied to the topic Anyone have Spotify? in the forum Music 1 year, 7 months ago
I think you’ll have to add me as a collaborator? My Spotify name is Lcoble
https://open.spotify.com/user/315fi2mbj5yuuwfxwactbjph5j4y?si=Jl_ubsZBRCWqkH_mBt8-gQ&dd=1
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Faith replied to the topic Talking about our characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks!
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Faith replied to the topic Talking about our characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley @kyronthearcanin @anyone-else
Okeydoke, here’s a new character I’ve just made the other day and haven’t gotten to talk about yet *rubs hands eagerly*
Name: Avani
Age: 14
Created by: yours truly, AwsumFaith
Personality Traits: kind, innocent, very anxious and fearful, but deep down she holds great…[Read more]
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Faith replied to the topic Talking about our characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
@dekreel @kyronthearcanin @freedomwriter76
Loving y’all’s charries!
Love Skylar too, and I’m liking that second backstory I think
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin
Rampart
There were more humans here. As well as a wolflike creature.
Curiously, it was the small kind, and not the dragon-sized wolves he was most familiar with.
No other dragons though.
He really was in strange territory.
The human was quite startled at him…pathetic.
The humans in…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@kyronthearcanin @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin
Ok! Here’s a short RP for y’all to continue off of. 🙂
Derek
As the threesome walked through the halls, Derek kept quiet, enjoying the chatter between Madeline and Eclipse. Or, rather, the continuous chatter of Madeline and Eclipse’s short, curt replies.
Derek chuckled to himself. It remin…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@kyronthearcanin @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin
I’m okay with bringing all the villains together if y’all are! 🙂
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