@kyronthearcanin
Active 2 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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whaley replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Good choice.
Awesome, thank you! *Sees the cookie box is already empty* *Refills it with caramel popcorn*
It’s difficult to make this scene clear, because it is confusing from the character’s perspective. He is supposed to not know why this is happening. So… yeah. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle and maybe? @raxforge
I’m confused, are we still in the basement or is something happening?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow got some hybrid info for you!
- Hybrids of human/anything else usually look like whatever species the non-human parent was, but often with something small missing. Or, conversely, they can be like humans with a few subtle clues of their other parent’s species. Example: Huntress and Scout. Huntress is effectively a full Changeling, but…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@calyhuge AHAHAHAHAHA
truth be told, that very thing kept happening. My soldiers (like the guys in the image, I have a bunch more but they were in the house) would shoot down the mobs running about at night, but every time they did that to a creeper it’d explode, and more often than not, the fence suffered because of it. At this point I put down…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Crosshair
“Mr. Crosshair? I think we may be in trouble.” Ayla gestured to the end of the hallway, where a stumbling, pale creature lurched.
Crosshair stared down his rifle scope at it, sizing it up. If he did this right, it would be dead before it knew.
Unfortunately, it chose that moment to look straight at the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Tlc & mcu crossover fic in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@smiley TBH I only write fanfics these days too. There are so many fan fictions out there, especially in some fandoms I’m in, that are just….no. Like the content they have in them… *shudders even though I’ve thankfully never actually read any bad stuff, I’m just aware of its existence*
So many times, I’ve taken it upon myself to write…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka ohh this is so awesome! I’m loving it so far.
Most of my characters are a too little unhinged for me to trust them showing up at my house lol
but maybe I’d manage to stop them from blowing something up before all was said and done
If only by threatening them with “I’m the author, I can erase you from existence as…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@theducktator Pretty much.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow All righty, I’ll be sure to do that!
@freed_and_redeemed wowwww I’m loving this story! My only issue: I get you’re trying to do a pseudo-Old English speech pattern, so it’s not accurate by any means, but when you say “It ’twas” the T in ’twas already stands for “it” so it’s kinda redundant.
Not anything that diminishes the quality of…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint Canadian Thanksgiving is today?
That’s cool! Today’s my brother’s birthday. Also, are the traditions and history behind Canadian Thanksgiving any different than American Thanksgiving or are they largely the same?
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whaley replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin @rae @freed_and_redeemed
Awesome, thank you all <3
Barnes “disappeared” but she’s actually close by, getting something to cheer him up. Probably a bag of baseballs.
For someone that hasn’t been through that, I will be honest in saying that it took me a moment or two to kinda figure out what was going on
Good to know. Since I was just w…[Read more]
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Keilah H.'s profile was updated 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic I have an Idea! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Cool! Sounds like it has a lot of potential 😊
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whaley replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
oh right, tags.
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @rae @honestlyidontknowwhowantstoseethis
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whaley started the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I would love feedback on this scene!
Warning, a scene of a character getting very overwhelmed to the point of panic.
– Here it is –
The ball flew across the empty baseball field, and landed with a puff of dust.
“Wahoo!” Sebastian leaped, and pumped his fist in the air. His curls gleamed, bouncing over his dull navy jacket. “Take that, d…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Looks like Percival has pride issues XD
Barnes
Reid used Rowan’s cloak to prop up the sleeping boy’s head. The group then ate in silence, the sizzle of meat singing to keep them company.
“…Now we can turn to conversation,” Barnes remarked.
Just don’t expect me to start it.
She took her own bowl of food and set it to the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
A bridge to the mainland; you can also see the cross pool. I put a cherry tree next to it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
The back view (so sorry if you’re annoyed at me for spamming!!)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Here is a full view of the island with my mansion/castle thingy and minecart track, from the front.
The one guy still wasn’t interested in getting out of my picture.
There’s a cage in the lower corner for a mob I caught, but it got out and died.
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