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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
Gotcha.
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Enid replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Fr. I don’t want characters to agree with me all the time, because then there would be nothing to think about.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life.
ehhh that’s characters in morally compromised settings for ya though.
Even your absolute favorite will most likely always, always say something that you don’t quite agree with if their plot has to do with them dealing with, or being, questionable people.
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Enid replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Wait what? You mean you don’t use spell check for the other book and still manage to have something readable?!
I didn’t know other writers couldn’t spell until I joined KP. XD I’ve rarely needed spell check. But my handwriting is horrible, and people can’t read it, so the skills balance out.
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Enid replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart. Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life. But it’s fun when a character has a specific part of their personality that takes action easily. In this case, it’s bitterness. Isaiah could easily become part of a political plot…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
It’s a shame we can’t comment yet. I have some good ones.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint ok! I’ll go read it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?
I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Have fun!! 😁
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
I definitely got that difference, but having you explain it helped even more.
Is Jace younger than the others? You described him as a boy multiple times.
Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol.
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Esther replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
I know this is a massive article I’m sharing, lol, but I’ve agreed with anything I’ve read from this website (and everything I’ve seen/read at the Creation Museum and Ark Encounter). This article explains why they believe the earth was created in six literal 24-hour days.
And to answer the question, I am also a young-earth creationist.
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
❤️❤️❤️
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD
Yes please do!
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.
Oh goodness! that’s ridiculous 😂
Some of the material will depend on state and my driver’s ed program said that there were a lot of road sign questions and you c…
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
(mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have)
I commend you for making up a restaurant. Mentioning real companies/brands in stories is a pet peeve of mine. XD
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Enid replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
yours are so wacky lol
The idea was to be wacky, but I wish I could say my last one is an exaggeration. It’s the most accurate out of the three. 🙃
Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.
Life be like that sometimes.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I do all the time and randomly remember during the day. XD
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aIjmMlC28TT3c9eMUpg1-9ASZ71vtWpJMhcSz_dmI_Y/edit?usp=drivesdk
I’ll send the Word link to your email, if you want that one too.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
@rae ohhh okay.
“blood eyes” sounds creepy but the concept properly described is actually really cool.
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