Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@linus-smallprint

I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart. Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life. But it’s fun when a character has a specific part of their personality that takes action easily. In this case, it’s bitterness. Isaiah could easily become part of a political plot…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint thanks!

It’s a shame we can’t comment yet. I have some good ones.

@linus-smallprint ok! I’ll go read it!

Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?

I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?

@savannah_grace2009 Have fun!! 😁

@liberty

I definitely got that difference, but having you explain it helped even more.

Is Jace younger than the others? You described him as a boy multiple times.

Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol.

I know this is a massive article I’m sharing, lol, but I’ve agreed with anything I’ve read from this website (and everything I’ve seen/read at the Creation Museum and Ark Encounter). This article explains why they believe the earth was created in six literal 24-hour days.

And to answer the question, I am also a young-earth creationist.

@savannah_grace2009

❤️❤️❤️

@savannah_grace2009

I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD

Yes please do!

@theducktator

I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.

Oh goodness! that’s ridiculous 😂

Some of the material will depend on state and my driver’s ed program said that there were a lot of road sign questions and you c…

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@grcr

(mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have)

I commend you for making up a restaurant. Mentioning real companies/brands in stories is a pet peeve of mine. XD

@keilah-h

yours are so wacky lol

The idea was to be wacky, but I wish I could say my last one is an exaggeration. It’s the most accurate out of the three. 🙃

Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.

Life be like that sometimes.

@theducktator

I do all the time and randomly remember during the day. XD

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aIjmMlC28TT3c9eMUpg1-9ASZ71vtWpJMhcSz_dmI_Y/edit?usp=drivesdk

I’ll send the Word link to your email, if you want that one too.

@rae ohhh okay.

“blood eyes” sounds creepy but the concept properly described is actually really cool.

btw I’m still working on that one story I promised you. I just have to type it up.

I was gonna do it today but my dad called me over and is basically offering me a job at the architecture firm he works at. So I had to listen cause I don’t have a job yet and coloring over floor plans all day sounds more fun than minimum wage at a grocery sto…[Read more]

@rae bruh lol

don’t all eyes have blood in them though?

@linus-smallprint I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.

@linus-smallprint Just so you know, you accidentally put chapter 33 before chapter 32, and you have chapter 30 twice.

@theshadow @theducktator @savannah_grace2009

Sorry for falling off the face of the planet there for a minute! XD Anyway, thank you so much for your feedback and I’ve read through it all and am FOR SURE taking every word into consideration (I just don’t feel like making individual replies to each one. I know. I’m lazy 🤣)

(Also, Sara, yes. It is…[Read more]