KydonAndWillow

@kyronthearcanin

Interesting. Your characters are fun, and I like the plot you got going. How does Rina discover her power? Does she maybe heal a solider, or herself? Would you like any critiques?

@kyronthearcanin

Also, what’s with the ranks? How does that work? I feel all shady as the Bumbling Henchman lol

It’s based off of the number of posts you’ve made total. I don’t know the different milestone numbers though XD

@kyronthearcanin

While I am still getting the final touches figured out, it is a mainly verbal language. If you’re wondering which race, it’s the Felisaro (they’re probably the most innovative out of the five). The main idea was that they teach it to all the Felisaro they can at a young age, keeping it as secret as possible, and don’t use it unti…

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@kyronthearcanin

Secret as in, only that race is supposed to know about it, so they can speak in secret if they ever need to, but the secret is found out after a while.

Right, but is it an encrypted version of another language? Because if they’re speaking in private, then there’s no point in having it (unless you do have a reason) and if they…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I like it, it’s always fun writing from the perspective of a child! I’ve only read a little bit of your writing before, so I don’t have full context, but it’s good. I don’t think I really have any criticisms, but the pull back to reality felt kinda sudden to me, but just something like a single line in between the flashback and…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ooh that riddle made my head hurt lol.

XD

Also, I’m playing around with a secret language for one of my races.

Cool! I’d love to hear about it! Secret in what way?

I’ve gotta go for now (youth event)

Have fun!

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks about the art! Can’t say I’ve heard of StarFox, but it sounds like it would look like my drawing haha.

Your welcome! Yeah, it’s a really old videogame from Nintendo.

1. Worldbuilding is amazing! I have to cut back to avoid overwhelming people lol. Aspects? Describing how things look to my character, or how they seem. Kind…

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@kyronthearcanin

Alright, sounds good! Is that to add friends or what? Sorry kinda new to this haha.

Oh just realized what the tag thing was haha.

XD XD

@kyronthearcanin

Here’s my proper response. Nice to meet you Ava! I’m TheArcaneAxiom. I’m a homeschooled writer about to leave highschool! XD I love math and fundamental divine truth, and discussing that through writing. I’m a sci-fi/fantasy writer as well, and I promise that you will see a lot more of that here! My current WIP is actually a…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Hi Ava! Imma tag a bunch of people first, then I’ll respond properly:

@gwyndalf-the-wise, @mineralizedwritings, @loopylin, @esther, @lightoverdarkness6, @godlyfantasy12, @whalekeeper, @acancello, @princesschronicle22, @freedomwriter76, @80strish, @otherworldlyhistorian, @others-I-likely-forgot

@esther-c

Like I often respond to questions like this, is that it depends on you and the kind of story you want to tell. I agree it’s false to objectify all boring parts of a book as unnecessary. A blatant example of this is informational writing, like biographies or textbooks, if you skip through the boring parts, you’ll likely be losing crucial…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

I do actually have a question.

So, I understand that people can join the groups to become one of the people who critique others’ work, but how do you become the one who gets their work critiqued? Do you have to be published on KP to get critiqued?

@katthewriter

No, I was on my iPad.

Thanks for letting us know!

Totally! 🙂

@acancello

Awesome!! 😀

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Oooo I really like that scene! =D

Thank ya!!! 🥰

However I don’t have any feedback/suggestions for you right now, sorry.

You’re good!! 🙂

@princesachronicle22

Yeah, I’ve considered a few options like that, but my main problem is, that this has already happened in the book. Simply a side characters view point of the scenario. She is assumed to be in leauge with the villains, but this is how I’m showing that she wasn’t at all.

So it was hard for me to state it as a full flash…

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@mineralizedwritings

That sounds like a really good idea!! 😀

You’re welcome!! 🙂

@katthewriter

I got it on my computer, and I’m seeing the same thing.

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! You can be vague if you want. I am curious, but for the sake spoilers, I can be patient.

Alright! 👍

I’m really bad at that, when I’m asked about something about my worldbuilding, even though it would be a spoiler, I just kinda dump it all out. I need to work on being more vague.

Lol XD

Yeah. My siblings don’t like it when…[Read more]