KydonAndWillow

@light-warrior-pen

First of all:

Congrats on finishing writing it!!! That’s a huge accomplishment!! 😄👏🎉

Now to answer your question, lol.

I would love to help you come up with a title!!

@felicity

I like Ev of course 😉 and *name escapes me* *facepalm* Ami!!!! I relate with her because I also struggle with trying to be perfect……and failing of course.

Ami is the best!! Ev wouldn’t be who he is now, or who he will be at the end of the trilogy without her. 😊

I am so in favor of you writing a book with Skylar and Lukas as MCs!!…

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@euodia-vision

Okay! I mean, I could change the spelling of Donovan to make it more… fantastical? XD Like Donovyn. Idk. Thanks for the input! 😁

That would work really well!

Glad I could help! 😀

I really like the collage!! Donovyn seems to fit well with the pic.

@freedomwriter76

Also, this article by @joy-calle might help: https://kingdompen.org/how-to-kill-a-hero/

@freedomwriter76

I don’t know what everyone else has said, but personally, I would go for the self-sacrifice idea. I think that truly shows the love of Christ in a meaningful why. That also would probably work better especially if you don’t want the reader to feel cheated. As for him taking the blame for something that others did, I don’t think…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks you guys! 💗(●’◡’●)

Of course!! 😊

And esther my mom and I are praying too, thanks for the reminder! And great verse too <3

Thank you so much!! ❤️

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Ok. So I use an app called that’s literally called Moodboard that I found in the Apple App Store. I works pretty well for me. Not too fancy though and it does have some issues. Like sometimes if I go back to edit a moodboard that I’ve stopped in the middle of, a picture will disappear, which is really annoying. Sometimes, the…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen

You didn’t tag me, but I’m here if you’d like any help.

@euodia-vision

Love the board! So if your going off of real world roots, and his old name was Kiran, meaning ray of light, then that would be the kiran from Indian origin, right? So perhaps you could get another word from India. Maybe you could incorporate his old name into it as well, saying that he was once a ray of light, but now is…[Read more]

@otherworldlyhistorian

(No distinction. He knows everything everything. The whole idea around this is basically that if you knew everything about one point (and had the knowledge to use this knowledge by knowing how everything works) then you could know everything. Also that is not achievable by humans. In a semi-paradoxial way this would allow…

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@freedomwriter76

Everyone already said some really great stuff, but I’ll see what I can add. It already sounds like a great story, and you sound conflicted about killing him off, so that’s a good start. One thing to consider before killing any character off is that you can’t use that character ever again after that (ignoring all revival stuff).…[Read more]

@otherworldlyhistorian @freedomwriter76

Wait… that’s Stalin?

My AP euro teacher showed him to our class and one of the girls was like “he actually looks kind of hot”.

😮😮😮😬😬😬

@otherworldlyhistorian

(Yeah! The deep discussions about life the universe and everything are the best kind!)

Ok. First. I shall now declare the neutrality of me within your question answer war. I enjoy questions but I also enjoy posing them in the form of statements and have an enjoyment of posing questions in desire of specific response. I…

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@godlyfantasy12

LUKAS!!!! BRODY!!!! 😍😍😍

Yessss!!! 😍

That quote in Brody’s about the brother even tho they aren’t by blood is so fitting for Pax and Ara too 😭

Aww!! 🥲❤️

@keilah-h

Cool! I love the quote on the second one. Sibling relationships in stories are great. (I have one brother myself, so….)

I know! (It plays into Ty’s character arc… an…[Read more]

And yes, Lukas is also artistic. 😊

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @joy-calle @gwyndalf-the-wise @thearcaneaxiom @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @felicity

I CANNOT forget my two precious charries!! Lukas Barlowe and Brody. (I don’t know if he has a last name. XD) These two are my other favorite charries cuz they’re my cinnamon rolls! 😍

Lukas Bar…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I’ll keep you in my prayers!! 🙏🏻 ❤️ Just keep praying about it as me and the other lovely folks on KP will be. Matthew 18:19 says, “Again, truly I tell you that if two of you on earth agree about anything they ask for, it will be done for them by my Father in heaven.” I have witnessed the fulfillment of this promise in my ow…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Ah… character naming… every writer’s struggle. 🤣

You’ve already got some good ideas. I really like Light’s suggestion of Donovan, since it is more common. Her suggestion of Devlin I thought was cool as well. But if you’re going for more fantasy like, then I really like either Devlin or Bronson. Gwyndalf’s suggestion of Kedrin sou…[Read more]