KydonAndWillow

@jonas

Yeah, I get it, school can be really busy! Though, when I homeschooled, I didn’t usually have that long of a day.

Now, with public school and volleyball, I go to school from 8 until 3:45, have practice from 4 until 5:30, then come home. My little sister does gymnastics, and my little brother does taekwondo in the afternoons (both still do…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Oh my goodness, I love that! if you post any of it on KP, please tag me, I would love to read that!

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks Min!

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @smiley @hybridlore @keilah-h

Here’s what I’ve been working on!

Beep. Beep. Beep. She squirmed in agony as the tendrils of sound beat against her temples like a jackhammer. She did not want to wake up. She did not want to open her eyes. She did not want to live in a world…

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@jonas

Sorry if it seems like I’m just ranting about my accomplishments, lol.

Let me rephrase that.

Sorry, I need to stop talking about how many words I have, lol.

Hi guys!

mind if I join the party, lol?

@jonas

Yeah, there’s definitely a happy medium!

Months without writing? I’ve been writing like….a LOT….my family thinks I’m mentally insane, as do my classmates, because of how much I write and am on KP lol. It’s hard to imagine not writing XD I just hit 20K! (1,000 more than I had last week, lol) My class thinks I’m weird because I’ll…[Read more]

@jonas

I’m usually the opposite, I get so excited about writing the first chapter that I write a couple pages, then start worldbuilding for real, and then I write a blurb. Though I haven’t done a lot of that, either. (Unfortunately, I write way more than I plan sometimes.) I usually find myself with a lot of chapters that don’t make much sense in…[Read more]

@jonas

I think I like Tempest and Flamebreaker the best.

I like your blurb! I would totally read that if it was in a library!

@thearcaneaxiom

I just read through the second chapter, and I really like it! How do you come up with these ideas? I could never, lol. I’m having problems just coming up with a simple magic system, haha.

Great work! Also, I like the second cover, because it shows the “reflection” thing that Talien was diagnosed with and I like the theme/design…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks!

@jonas

yeah, I do agree with you it is realistic, I’m just experimenting with Marcurious a bit. But you’re right, Marcurious does end up having a sort of breakdown later.

The more I think about it, I guess that character arc is Marcurious a little bit, after he spends a week in the UNIT, hehe (insert evil laughter and horrible smells. bwahaha!).…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I really like the chapter! You did really well explaining things, but not info-dumping. One question, though, if Tailen is going to starve to death, wouldn’t he die of dehydration first? Or was that explained and I just missed it?

As for the covers, the first one is simpler, which might be good, but the other one is cool too. N…[Read more]

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

Marcurious now has a catch phrase, lol.

Well, I’m dead. 

@jonas

Well…you have great points!

I think that Marcurious is an interesting one, because he’s just used to having his way and getting himself out of trouble that he doesn’t see this as any different. He sees himself as a “god” of sorts, and sees the Pythonos as just another challenge that he can overcome.

By the way, is his ability to turn…

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@rae

Pumpkin spice lattes? Or no? okay…I have never had a latte, let alone a Pumpkin Spice one. But, I do like Pumpkin Spice to begin with, so most likely yes.

Pumpkin spice lattes are THE BEST. LATTES are the best. I would totally reccomend….lol.