KydonAndWillow

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, it is really cool! Not everyone likes to use it, but I find it really helpful in the beginning stages of developing a character.

Lukas 

“W-well, I guess… I guess we’ll all just have to make the best out of the time we do have together.” He smiled softly. “And you could always visit Aletheia. It’s not in its best con…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

WOW!!! That looks great!! Good job!! 😃

@godlyfantasy12

Basically, this story started out as a fun party with your characters. And then we switched it to a really crazy/chaotic but extremely FUN Role Play…and then it died after 352 pages 🙁

Jonas made another topic for the action adventure one, but I’m keeping this one as the “Party” section. All the characters woke up after a dream…[Read more]

@proncesachronicle22

WOW! That’s amazing! Great job!

I like how they look handwritten more, but this is just gibberish.

Just like Lasi’el, this is saying “Ajlu vas Rrajlan? Ajlu rev Rrajlan.” Meaning, “Do you speak Rrajlan? I speak Rrajlan.”

Next conlang showcase! Rrajlan

Rrajlan is spoken by the people of the same name. The Rrajlan people are neighbors to the Shome’el, living beside the dark, cold center of Omialia, known in their tongue as the Alunakan.

Rrajlan has a VSO structure (verb subject object)

Some might find the Rrajlan to be a rude and perhaps even evil people. This…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, that would be something good to build towards later on, but you’ll still need a more immediate plot.

@esther-c

I like it!! Can’t wait to read more!!

I really like this, lol:

“Nine dreks! Ev, you didn’t have to I—”

“Ah, ah, ah! I already did. Eat it and be grateful.” He flashed her a smile.

I also like Amidala.

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Ok, from here is my own opinion… you obviously don’t have to listen to me. 😊

The only thing that I thought I might menti…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Nope, Lilitu’s not in here.

@freedomwriter76 @jonas @rae

Sef

She closed her eyes, tremors shaking her small form.

She took a step back.

And another.

And then her back hit the wall.

She was trapped.

@esther-c

I love them! They’re so sweet! <3

@esther-c

I’ve never really heard of the MBTI stuff before KP and haven’t looked much into it…but it sounds cool!

Liv

She looked at Lukas. He was so caring…so-

She felt the tears coming again.

“What’s wrong?” he asked, looking into her eyes.

“I-I-” she tried to keep her voice from breaking. “I made so many friends here…and then I’ll…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks!! Me too 😊😁

@savannah_grace2009

🤣 I love that!!!

Lukas is so loyal though. I just did the Myers-Brigg test on him and he’s an ISFJ-T. (I don’t know if you’re into MBTI types or not XD I just discovered them last year and they have been super helpful)

Lukas

He laughed, a laugh full of mirth. “True, but I… I think he’ll understand. He has Callie after all.…[Read more]

@esther-c

OH MY GOSH I LITERALLY SCREAMED AND HOPPED AROUND MY ROOM AND MY SIBLINGS WERE SO CONFUSED lol

Livia

“I-I’d like that,” she smiled at him, and then sighed, burying her face in her hands. “Fynn is never going to let us live this one down…”

@esther-c

I love him so much!!!

@hybridlore

Thanks!!