KydonAndWillow

@whalekeeper

Don’t die, Whaley! *runs in circles panicking* whatdowedowhatdowedowhatdowedo?

@keilah-h

NO! I. WILL. NOT. YIELD! *swings sword wildly at air* WYOH. MUST. DIE! *spins around, still swinging sword* DEATH TO TECH GHOSTS! *falls over*

@freed_and_redeemed

Ooh, I’m kinda struggling with something similar with a new WIP idea.

What I’ve been starting to notice is that you have to weigh the importance of each scene. Is each scene impacting the MCs arc in some way? How does it move along the plot? And sometimes some scenes will feel slow, but that’s not always a bad thing. Brain…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad I could offer some helpful input!

Ooh, can’t wait to read this next chapter later today!!

@keilah-h

Hehehe… 😂

@trailblazer

Thanks so much!! That’s what I was going for! 😊

Also may or may not have just almost tagged you as easter-c XD.

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I had Sunday school teachers when I was young that would spell my name that way. I was so confused how anyone could get my name wrong!! XD And now sometimes my friends or siblings call me Easter jus…[Read more]

@theducktator

Alas indeed! Something must be done. Wyoh is out there somewhere. We must find her… and destroy her. Draw your swords, KPers, we ride! *charges off in random direction*

Is it just me or are all the pfps gone (again)??

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Maybe it will now…

STARDUST | #4

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGAh2cvMtg/MMjaEViOrNHZo6FaGdCTNA/edit?utm_content=DAGAh2cvMtg&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

Oh, but the last one did not share.

And a third….

STARDUST | #3

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGAiouwrXU/rz-t9B9jUalXqId5GE5Amg/edit?utm_content=DAGAiouwrXU&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

Ehh… maybe it will work it I share one at a time…??

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STARDUST | #2 (I’ll probably redo this one)

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGAiKo93Bs/imGl8K73VrrSJyM910URuA/edit?utm_content=DAGAiKo93Bs&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

Will it let me share my boards…??

STARDUST | #1

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGAiBxrnjw/cxqoRqxlF2RKoI3iiaE9UA/edit?utm_content=DAGAiBxrnjw&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton

Oh, there they go….

@esther-c

Yup, that’s pretty much what I was saying. XD XD Glad I could help! 😀

Wow. None of my post have been going through. Thanks a lot Wyoh.

@rae

oh my gosh XD lol

I love Buck Wild…he’s the best!!

@rae

Ooh, this looks fun! I’m not sure if I’ll be able to join (I’m already so behind in my other rps! 😭) but I might eventually. I’ll probably stick around and see what happens first. It looks really fun.

@savannah_grace2009

I forgot to tag you a second time in my post. Part of my rely to you is the last quote and paragraph on the post above the post above this one. (That’s unnecessarily complicated…. XDD)

@keilah-h

I honestly don’t mind multiple POVs from first person, because the time I read it, each chapter was labeled with the character’s name so you knew who was speaking. But yeah, I see how it could get confusing.

@stephie

Yeah, plotting is probably one of my weaker points of writing. 😂 The extent to which I plot varies from story to story and I’m not sure if that’s a good thing… XD

Another suggestion would be to try and write the worst first draft you could possibly write. That’s how my dad got more than 100% on a university level essay.

I may just ha…[Read more]