Koshka

@koshka

*Creeps in, face hidden in the depths of my cowl. Waves a greeting to Kitty.*

Good day, I have entered here to expound unto you my delight in your books and presence.

*After my fervent salutation, I slip off into the snow, the snow swept clean by the hem of my kirtle.*

Пока!

@koshka

Okay so first of all, I love this! The prologue was very poetic and although it wasn’t evident that the characters were wolves until the line of wolfish pride was mentioned, I thought it was very good. (Love that line btw).

Alright so here’s a weird thing I love looking at in fiction: the weather. I adored the weather and the aes…[Read more]

@koshka

XD You’ll get there.

I was surprised those were his first fictional novels. That’s some Godly inspiration right there.

@elishavet-pidyon

George Macdonald? I don’t recognize that name. Andrew Peterson quotes him?

@anatra23 @koshka

Wasn’t it? And it’s good to end a series before it gets fizled out. He ends it with “Hey, there’s more coming, it’ll be better than what’s here, but that’s a new epoch. Let’s go and have our own adventures.”

And I love the George MacDonald quote as the epigraph. It’s so perfect.

Plus,(sorry this has been a bit of a ramble) if…[Read more]

@koshka

You are really good at drawing animals! Love it! And @keilah-h , yours is so cool. Love his unimpressed expression😂.

OH YES.
I am happy this exists.

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h

It is so beautiful.

XD I’ve ruined so many of my favorite books by reading the end when I’m only halfway through ;-; hlp.

I’m glad Andrew Peterson decided to go with putting that ending in the epilogue. It was smart, the perfect way to carry on the story without the…[Read more]

@koshka

Oh, good! I always love explaining this, so a wolf biography is basically just that. A wolf biography is written by people who observe and record a wolf’s life or a part of that wolf’s life. Which I think is super cool since like you said, wolves get a bad rep a lot of the time. People always hear about them attacking people when rea…[Read more]

@koshka

Sorry, that post turned out way longer than I thought it would be.

@koshka

Yeah, sometimes that activity board -honestly I’m not sure what its called- doesn’t always work the best with replies and stuff. *Shrugs* Oh well, this works perfectly and I won’t tell him you said that XD 🙂

That’s so cool that you love wolves too! I don’t know a lot of people who are huge fans, so its always great to meet a fellow fa…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

It is amazing! I think the best thing for me is being able to like nerd about Bible characters, especially Jesus! And the relationships between the disciples, especially brother-brother relationships like Simon and Andrew, James and John, are really great!

@koshka

I get where you’re coming from. The Chosen does try to be h…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Have you seen The Chosen? It’s quite good biblical fiction and does what you were saying with making the characters believable and have flaws and all that. It’s a great series about Christ’s disciples and the struggles they might have faced following him during the years of his ministry. It’s really cool, and they have two whole s…[Read more]

What’s crazy is after I posted I kinda figured out Kai’s would be fear of failing lol! But all these ideas for Ardan are great!!! Thx yall!!

@anatra23 WOW I LOVE THIS thank u!

@koshka oh yes the need, gotta remember that lol! Thx for reminding me lol

@koshka

Ok, yeah! Thanks, that probably works better, and might help limit the reader to the protagonist’s view point. Anything else? 🙂

@koshka, @anatra23, @power, @anyone

Because you might like to read it and help revise.

@gracie-j @elishavet-pidyon @koshka I could actually use some help rn lol.

I need some help with 2 things.

I’ve got my protagonist’s Desire and misbelief down but not his fear, and I’ve got of my side character’s Desire and fear down but not his misbelief

Kaithen- Protagonist

Desire: To be more then just an errand boy, to be more then one who…[Read more]

@koshka thank you so much! I’ll definitely be on here for some tips I’m sure!

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Thank you so much! That’s one of my best so far.

Oops! I didn’t tag

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@koshka