@koshka
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Still not sure what to RP at this point isn’t time…
someone wanna get us moving to the sleeping quarters? Maybe one of the guys can carry Franz?
OH maybe Keilah’s new character is at the sleeping area??? In that tower or whatever and that’s where we find him? Just spitting out ide…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 Yes! Honestly, I’m going to do it now. Jareth’s probably going to wander alone for a little while before he finds the group. Also he has his pet with him–a little creature of my brother’s creation called Crowshadow, or Crow for short cause he’s black.
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 Adding a new character who will…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Yep, those three characters sound good! It’s gonna be awkward though when Crosshair tells Eva she reminds him of Feather (his wife)……they don’t look similar but I kind of feel like they’d get along.
Crosshair
Riker’s father snapped some particularly harsh words…..and slapped his…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Book Topic Updates in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka thank you! Not even Grammarly caught that. There is more to the story, that snippet isn’t actually supposed to be the first scene. Bronwen is hunting rocky mountain elk in late autumn when she realizes she made a mistake whil navigating and she can’t find her way back; then the rest of the story is just an excuse to write about…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Why write clean? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 years, 1 month ago
*APPLAUSE*
Focus is everything. I agree with everyone on here in that there’s a balance. We need to see the darkness behind our backs and the light before us, before we can take a step.
By the way, nice to meet you! XD Gummy bears for the win! I’ve had long, psychologically challenging conversations about gummy bears. Believe…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76 soooo I actually dunno what to RP rn lol…anyone wanna go?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
By the way, I don’t know if I’ve clarified this yet, but Viktor has nightmares sometimes about the night his parents died. (He doesn’t know that’s what it is, though he does suspect it’s more of a memory than imagination.) It’s also the time he got his hands burned. According to the people that…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Alyona
It was over. She had located Viktor as soon as the fists had stopped flying. He was sitting against the wall, his head leaned back, watching Franz with a much more peaceful expression.
Then he had come forward and now he was checking after Riker and the others.
Alyona followed Arabella…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
November
Riker had pulled away, leaving November feeling a bit cold, though he wasn’t about to say anything. He knelt by his father, pleading with him. November frowned in concern, his heart twisting in empathy. He could definitely understand where Riker was coming from.
What if it was R…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
Jocelyn & Nyx
Nyx made his way off of Franz’s limp body, his fur covered in a blood that wasn’t his own. He hissed, even though the man was no longer conscious.
“Nyx!” Lyn’s voice made his ears twitch. He turned towards her as she approached slowly.
Everyone seemed a bit…shaken at Franz’s…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Ah, yes. This is perfect! (In a horrible way.)
Viktor
The man was on the ground, the fight was over. Viktor’s shoulder ached from where he’d collided with Zlatan.
From Zlatan’s face, Viktor guessed the Voyager didn’t mind that Viktor had pushed him away from his purpose.
Or rather, back onto…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Wow. These characters… Wow.
*Pulls Zlatan into the group hug*
*Doesn’t think Nyx would want to be huged by a stranger*
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
So everyone is going at Franz now XD, so how bout we say it’s kinda free for all, and now Franz is unconscious on the ground, thx to all three guys (Zlatan, Nyx and Viktor XD)
and Arabella certainly have him a good talking to that’s for sure. She probably would’ve slapped him to if she’d…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Ooooooooooooooo! Pizza!
Riker, November… Words fail.
Alyona
Something had changed. This was bad.
Alyona strained to see her brother’s face. When she did, the breath left her lungs.
Lit with a strange fury, his face shone white, but the anger met grief in his eyes. Dangerous grief.
He…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
POOR RIKER 😭 FRANZ HOW DARE YOU!
Arabella
”NOVEMBER!” Ara screamed as the man raised his fist. November froze and Ara’s heart plummeted.
“No!” Riker moved, shielding November from the blow and taking it instead. Blood sprouted from his jaw and Ara gasped, tears streaming down her face.
Wa…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Novembee flinched violently at the first slap, feeling his own face sting. His eyes watered as a memory slipped in.
November’s fists clenched. “YOU COULD’VE HURT HER!” He cried, lunging for the journal. Riven raised his hands and with a swift motion, November was hurled into the flo…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
All our dearest characters are our hurt ones!!!
Oh, if Alwin we’re here right now….
Viktor
The man… Hit… Riker.
Viktor’s mind froze on the image, unreal in the torch light. His ears filled with the sound of the blow.
And Alya’s scream.
Then two things fell into place.
This was a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
November
Something hard pressed into his hand, and, for a split second, November wondered if Ara had stepped up to join him. He jerked his head to the side and found Viktor next to him. He glanced down and saw a stone in his palm.
“Here.” Viktor whispered, “Let’s stand vanguar…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Oh boy.
Viktor
It was not a gaurd, thank the Lord, and it wasn’t one of the retainers Viktor had seen during the day. This man was a stranger to him.
But not to others.
“Father, please calm down.” there was almost a quaver in Riker’s voice. The man had placed himself in front of November and…[Read more]
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