@koshka
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Anyone want a Matthias scene?
(also feat Charna, Moishe, and Avrum, lol)
Matthias followed Charna down the winding halls, his shoes echoing much louder than he once anticipated. The winding halls were dark, and dare he think it, even foreboding.
They seemed to stretch on endlessly, as if they were paths that led the…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
EEEEEEE
y’all have no idea how HAPPY it makes me that y’all like this new story idea!!! (esp bc Leon and Riker don’t wish to cooperate rn😭 but this idea won’t leave my head, so XD I’m actually currently writing a scene for it)
and y’all haven’t even met Avrum, Moishe (I am loving his personality already,…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@whalekeeper @esther-c (Hmm, he’s probably been playing since he was…mmm 10 probably. His mother taught him how to play, hehe. Although he stopped for several years…so he’s probably played for around…7 years or so?? He stopped after he married Iris, but still remembers how to play. (he even plays it in Freedom’s Fire once <3)) @rae @koshka @e…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @rae @koshka @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD
Ok, soooooo I’ve been trying to brainstorm for another novel idea of mine that I’ve had for a while and would like to hear some inputs/thoughts
So, thanks to my Mom’s creativity, I finally figured out why Erich, a side character (and…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Yessssss, very much so! I really loved the body language and it really conveyed Nahim’s feelings/emotions/fears for sure!
Good. I was worried it was kinda unclear.
A Violinnnnnnnnn (and I was over here excited, like: HEYYY, RIKER PLAYS VIOLIN!! XD)
No way! That’s amazing! Idk even how to react, that’s just SO GREAT! And I’m o…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@rae Hiiiiiiiii!!!
First off, your descriptions are absolutely FABULOUS, girl!! Like, I can see this scene so much <3
and now for your questions…
- Not at all! I think it’s a good length for a scene!
- nope, I don’t think so!
- Yessssss, very much so! I really loved the body language and it really conveyed Nahim’s feelings/emotions/fears…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@esther-c @whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @rae @joy-calle @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lol
Sooooo I’m currently working on a scene for one of my novels…and I need some advice😅
The two MCs of this novel have both been imprisoned by Soviet Forces (this is 1950s East Germany, btw) for being involved in the underground church.
It’s…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@grcr @whalekeeper @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @smiley @rae @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @gracie-j @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
who wants to read more Leon and Riker???
perhaps no one, but I want to share anyhow😂
anywhoooo, here we gooooooooooo
Klaus…Louisa…everyone sai…
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freedom replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @koshka @rae @esther-c @anyone-else-help-meeeeeee
SOOOOOOO i’m currently working on Book 2 (Broken Shackles) of my main Trilogy (the trilogy that only features Leon/Riker as the MCs/POVs throughout all three novels)
but I’m really struggling with the middle of it 😩
I’m currently on…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@loopylin @koshka @whalekeeper @rae @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else-lol
Sooooooo, knowing how sad that chapter was…I give to y’all the following chapter!!!
The first half is kinda bittersweet (ok, ok, it’s still kinda sad…I’M SORRY, OK???😭💖) but the second half of the chapter…..eeeeeee, I love it sm and it is soooo…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @esther-c @whalekeeper @rae @loopylin @anyone-I’m-forgetting
Thank y’all for all of your thoughts! <3 They were very kind and helpful and it means a lot that y’all took some time to respond💕
and don’t worry, Riker/Leon will both be fine!!
Eventually
😏
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @smiley @rae @anyone-else
ok, ok, I know I’m supposed to be gone but I really want some feedback on this chapter…I like how it turned out but I just REALLYYYYY need some feedback, haha, so I may still pop on and off on occasion but don’t expect…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @freed-and-redeemed @godlyfantasy12
I am so excited. XD I made working covers for all three volumes of Heirs of Ashes. And found a really bad quality image of my current reference illustration for Viktor and Alyona.
My first one had reeaaalllyyy small ears….Now I should actually try to write that first volume….
Here’s a t…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic Your Passion in Writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I’ve been wondering about this since discussing writing as a gift from God (with Esther and various others… I can’t remember who because I’m so sick right now 😂).
I’ve noticed everyone has a different writing approach. I don’t mean strategy, plotter/pantser, etc.  But everyone has a different level of passion, different focuses, and especially h…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@koshka *whistles and strides away*
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@koshka I am going to have to do more research (once I get to that WIP, at least XD) @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @grcr @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @smiley @keilah-h @rae @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-idk-lol
I have a couple more scenes I wanna share!!! ✨✨
“You know you’re always wel…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@koshka Yesssss, it is possible. It really is 😂
His book/arc would highlight persecution/speaking up when the rest of the world is silent…and I think I have an idea for who the 2nd MC could be…
Nikolai and Peter as the MCs of a Soviet Russia novel would be a lot of fun :3
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@koshka Hehe, I’m glad you’re excited!!! That’ll be quite a bit of their 3rd book, so I’m glad you like it😂
Yesss, I love it too <3 I like him already…he may get his own book at some point😆
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @smiley @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @whalekeeper @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-heh-I-can-think-XD
I have this possible scene for Leon/Riker’s 3rd novel!!!
There’s probably more to this scene, but I haven’t written the rest of it yet and wanted to share what I have so far✨
I love them so…[Read more]
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