@koshka
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka hm good question, I think we may wait to get split up till after this confrontation?? And after we get some rest? Cuz my charries are getting dead on their feet 🤣
Then maybe something happens like guards rush in where they’re sleeping and everyone has to seperated in the panic? We’ll figure out who is with who then
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHHHH NARRRRRRRRRR
@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon PREPARE FOR TROUBLE
(and make it double) #teamrocketreference XD
ALSO OH MY WORD THE PROPOSAL SRSLY SOUNDS LIKE NOVEMBER!!!!! Like…his proposal would srsly be like that and I have a feeling Ara would just laugh and be like “A thousand times yes!” Before he even gets the q…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon bruh Lyn would also have a grand time scaling to a tower window XD November…probs not cuz he be like “I’m gon fall…it’s gonna happen XD”
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November
November had latched onto one of his hobbies. “You write? Ara likes to read,” He smiled to himself, imagining all the times he’d watched her becom…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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Alyona
They were off again, at a more leisurely pace this time. Alyona plucked Viktor’s elbow.
“What?” He glanced at her.
“Isn’t the tower blocked off?” She whispered.
He shrugged – a sure sign he didn’t know what to say. “Just the door.”
“The door. As in, the entrance?” She raised an…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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Crosshair
The girl proceeded to explain. “No. Yes….but not in our country. But in Dorwain, they sometimes do it.”
Dorwain? He’d never heard of it.
“A captain will sometimes brand his own soldiers. Especially if they’re captives.” She shuddered.
He almost felt like shuddering too.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon y’all wanna go? You can get us walking if ya want
also, while we’re headed there why don’t converse with the charries? That way it’s not just us walking XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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November
Alyona’s last comment had left a bitter taste in November’s mouth. He swallowed. Hard.
He tugged at his curls anxiously, his neck starting to sweat. Who would…purposely brand someone?
Then again…November had come to learn that the world around him wasn’t all peaches and…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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Ok, now I’m not sure where to take this. It’s fun any way it goes!
Alyona
Thank the Lord for Viktor. If only he could always be with her.
She hadn’t meant to draw attention their way. The situation had been frightening for a moment, but now the strange man was quiet and the Voyager’s were…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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Yeah, it’s totally fine. I can see why Crosshair’s rather judgmental voice is bothersome to the others; it’s kinda his natural tone, but they’re not used to it. I always say he has a “snake-like” kind of voice.
Crosshair
“Who are you asking?” Viktor snapped, narrowing his eyes. “If it…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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The Gang
Nyx’s hackles had immediately raised at Crosshair’s tone. His tired head lifted in a piercing gaze and his ears perked.
Viktor’s hand flew to his side but Lyn was too busy focusing on her companion to pay any mind to others around her.
Thankfully, Viktor eventually calmed the situa…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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I don’t know if this was how Crosshair intended it to come across as, but I’m having fun so…
Alyona
Her heart still pounding, Alyona peeked back over her brother’s shoulder.
And met Crosshair’s gaze.
She slid back but not in time; the man had seen her and was suspicious.
Viktor
“What a…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Hi, fellow weird writers… in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 1 month ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen-of-alvastia I’d be a Throne Warden, cause I’m the oldest, which is kinda cool. And my brother would eventually be king….that would be weird.
And my mom was the middle child in her family! That means she’d be queen!
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Enid replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Thank you 🙂 It’s middle-grade fantasy. Personally, I think we need more writers writing for younger audiences. There is a lot of good stuff out there, but it’s overlooked sometimes as a genre.
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Enid replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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Wow, these quotes are amazing and funny and deep!! (I’d put a heart emoji here, but I don’t know how to on a keyboard XD) Thank you SO much for sharing!
I look at these, and I think… hehe… I guess my WIP takes a different approach…
1. “THIS IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN PEANUT BUTTER!!!”
2. Alfonso’s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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Crosshair
One boy stepped up. “I am Victor Mynclais. I hail from Yartass, a son of Eirtan.”
Crosshair had zero idea where that was. Feather would probably know, what with her knowledge of weird places, but she wasn’t here.
“My name’s Jocelyn!” piped up one of the girls, the one who…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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Arabella
All eyes turned to focus on their group. Ara frowned at the attention and reached for November’s hand. She allowed a piece of her hair to fall over one eye, hoping to hide some of the stares.
Her anxieties had gotten better since their recent adventure with Lyn and Nyx, but the t…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Hi, fellow weird writers… in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 1 month ago
Hello, and thanks for welcoming me! I would love to hear a random poem now and then 😊
C.S. Lewis is awesome! When I was little, I used to listen to the Narnia books on audio night and day – I practically had Dawn Treader memorized.
I did move here summer of 2020, so we got the brunt of the heat.
1. Oh, character, definitely, mainly…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Ok, y’all. I’m sorry it’s been awhile. I haven’t been able to do much/anything on here this week.
All y’all’s responses are great! Now to do my part.
Alyona
From her brother’s protective shadow the scene before her looked both more and less threatening. Not that she could see much of…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka that is very sad as I must say I luv the twins
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