@koshka
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Felicity replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
So I’ve been stalking this page…you have to agree it’s super fun to read!
Nyx turned around, eyes wide with horror. “And you’re still in highschool?!”
Hilarious! I love it! 😀
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Luna
Though she didn’t understand it entirely, the language the young man…obviously an elf like she, spoke tickled her ears, making her senses tingle. Her brain picked at the sounds, trying to decipher the language, but she couldn’t quite pick it all out.
She laughed sweetly at the exchange between Inglor and Almarrin, and then looke…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
Ok!
Reúven & others
Well, here they were. Literature right off the top. Reúven pulled a chair out for Liora and he and Viktor sat down on either side.
The teacher had stepped out to talk with another teacher in the hall, letting the students settle in before class started. She wa…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @koshka @felicity @madelyn @theloonyone @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper
Here is another scene I wrote. This is after Christopher and Briana have been captured and have escaped. Christopher was fighting off a guard and told Briana to run. They just met again.
“I see you’re angry at me for doing what you told me…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 ahh Erich, I luv u lol!! But don’t go getting into trouble!! Tho…I feel like that’s where we’re heading!!
@elishavet-pidyon u on and want to RP with Reúven and them meeting Lyn and Grimm?
I’m finally on for a while!
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Arien started the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Okay, I said I’d post something from my last book, A Dream Come True, so here is the pitch and the first chapter!
First, the pitch:
Elinor and her twin brother Aedan were supposed to be like children to the Dickinsons. Instead, the Dickinsons treat them more like slaves. When Aedan learns that the Dickinsons are planning to sell them as servants…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka agh I love him!
Luna
Sister?
Luna’s smile grew. She giggled at the words. She didn’t have any siblings, though she’d always wanted one. Many of the adults and elders of her commune tended to call her Little Sister, or youngling. Little one. Little elf. A variety of sweet nicknames they’d given her over the years…
But, it was curious h…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon that would be an interesting scene! And ugh!! Alwin has my heaaart!! @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wolder-w @keilah-h
Paxton
“Are…Are you ok?”Ok? He was far from ok…
But, he slowly nodded, figuring the young man was asking more about wether he’d been hurt in their sudden collide and less about Paxton’s current mental and emotiona…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @felicity @koshka @theloonyone @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
So it seems like a lot of you said the same things, and I realized that just this scene alone doesn’t make much sense lol 🙂 So I’ll try to explain a little more.
This is basically the climax of Christopher and Briana’s relationship. So it’s…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
The poor baby!
Also, I have an idea for a scene for later after Alwin has met some more charries in which he gets knocked over and… his backpack falls open.
But for now…
Alwin
An annoying buzz sounded overhead, calling Alwin’s attention to his slow feet. He sped up, his worn t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka hehehe XD
Luna
“So…how did you escape again?”Nyx groaned, eyes rolling to ceiling. “I already told you! She gets distracted way too easily. It was easy.”
“You know she’s gonna be livid,” Luna giggled. “She made this whole speech about keeping you by her side…pretty sure she’s gonna make good on getting a pair of handcuffs if you keep s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka who do u want ur charries to meet? Ik Luna lol! Maybe Luna and Nyx??
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
Ma poor Paxton….
Paxton
Paxton scrubbed at his eyes, hastily stumbling down the hall, making sure to keep close to the wall.
He glanced over his shoulder, wondering if Aramis would follow soon after.
Thankfully, no one came.
He let out a small, shaky breath of relief, hands f…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@wilder-w @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 (November!!!) @koshka @freedomwriter76
Reúven
Golden sunlight splashed across the crowd of students, staining everything in light. Reúven squinted at the brightness and shifted his eyes away.
Better to not burn spots into his vision.
Viktor walked beside him like a young soldier going to court martial. The b…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka AHHH I LOVE THAT!!
and Luna’s just gonna be like BLAH BLAH BLAH *and talk his ear off XD*
she grew up in an all adult commune with like no kids or teens to talk to so yea.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @wilder-w @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Soren
“You messed up, Edrich.”
Aramis mocked a gasp, placing a hand over his chest. “He speaks!” He raised his hands, gesturing at Soren. “Oh great one, please deliver your knowledge and wisdom to us!” At the end of his sentence, he rolled his eyes, plopping himself back onto the be…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@wilder-w @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 anyone wanna RP?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka UUUGHHH I LOVE THEM!!! I am a SUCKER FOR ELVESSSS and u write them so beautifully…..
November
November shifted with his sling, frowning as he tried to maneuver the strap behind his neck with one hand.
Man, was this thing itchy….
And so was his arm…
Nope. Don’t think about it…otherwise it’s going to bother you all day!…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 9 months ago
@starofthenorth I agree with @koshka in putting the emphasis on the characters themselves, instead of generally ‘boys’ and ‘girls.’ (Unless there’s a specific reason to.)
By the way, I have a character named Christopher who, in a particularly emotional moment, says ‘I guess the feeling is mutual.’ Are you spying on my brain, or is it just me? 😶 -
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Arabella
“Oh! Hello, Hope…” Ara smiled, though she was sure it didn’t meet her eyes. She unclenched her fists. “Sorry…just…a bit tense. Everything’s a bit hectic right now.”
Hope nodded, “Yea…I-I’m sure…”
Ara folded her hands, “I suppose we never got formerly introduced, but…well, we already know each other’s names,” Ara laughed lig…[Read more]
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