Koshka

@linus-smallprint

Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.

i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yes! I’m planning, Lord willing, to write a book with these guys in it.

I did notice a few times that some words you used were either typos or not words at all (or words I’d never seen.)
Thanks. I think I caught all of those.

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more w…[Read more]

@keilah-h

don’t all eyes have blood in them though?

True, just his are completely red in the sclera

Guy with eyes that look like they have blood in them tries to get revenge on humanoid spider.

@keilah-h

@linus-smallprint

Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.

I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.

Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.

@linus-smallprint

Can you re-invite me.

Smaug attack.

Again.

Lost EVERYTHING.

Ugh.

@linus-smallprint

*enraged because I was never tagged by KP*

I will look at this as soon as I can. aka tomorrow.

Maybe.

@whalekeeper

anything you can offer.

@elishavet-pidyon

Yay!!

@hybridlore

Thanks.

Noted.

@ellette-giselle

Signing in for the long haul. I can look for rogue grammar and suspicious word choices.

Code key: nuanced syntax.

@koshka

Perfect!

@linus-smallprint

Yeah. Dented up my pretty blue car. 😢

@linus-smallprint

wait…. did this hot my inbox really late….. or was I on there before it was released?! 😱

I literally just got done commenting and editing chapter 32

@linus-smallprint

No kidding.

Plus someone crashed me yesterday going into town. Add that to the list. 🙄

@linus-smallprint

I’m so sorry, I have been swamped. I kept trying, but i just haven’t got the time right now.

@koshka

Oh yes, an email thread would be best.

Oh, did you see that I have a chapter of the first book out?

I greatly needs your opinion!!

@koshka

*Screams and dances in a circle*

OH MY WORD!!!!!!!!

I so want Leo to meet Cass now. Those two would get along so well.

and all the world would suffer for it.

@linus-smallprint

Sounds good.

@linus-smallprint

haha… yeah. Uh, it went through some more rewrites. Again.

Okay then, sounds good.

Shall i still tag you, or do you want to just let me know when you’re back on?

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint   @theducktator   @grcr

( @kyronthearcanin      @whalekeeper        @jonas      @power  ) Y’all haven’t responded, so I’ll tag you for now, but let me know if you don’t want me to anymore.

Okay all, chapter 1 is out. I’m using Microsoft Word. I think if…[Read more]

@koshka

will do!

Thanks! I know!!!!! Poor kiddos!!