@koshka
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 13 hours ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 13 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @power
Announcing the winners!!!!
First, like the previous judges, I will go over each story.
Shadow:
What a short, sweet story! You are sucked right into a conflict,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 14 hours ago
good work!!
wait… your hand cramps from writing? Mine never did that. I thought it was a myth.
but I also thought unions burning peoples eyes was a myth until my friend and I were cooking stir fry and she started tearing up really bad while cutting them. 🤣
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 14 hours ago
oh my goodness. She’s a horrible mother. 😂
(and I feel bad for laughing)
I was actually thinking about the magic. It seems to be thought based. Like yours. At first it seems emotion based, but then when I rewatched “let it go” to see if I was right, it seems more thought based. Whatever it is, we aren’t told how she’s c…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 15 hours ago
Oh goodness.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 16 hours ago
oh goodness.
there is so much wrong with that song.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 17 hours ago
hey, weird question. I was thinking about your magic system……
have you ever seen Frozen?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 17 hours ago
yeah I missed that with them having won. But maybe that was just me.
oh okay! No problem. Sorry for the confusion.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 18 hours ago
I don’t see why the priest has to be involved. I could go into this and why I believe it’s unbiblical, but this is a time when I’m not going to. Honestly, are you going to convert me to catholicism? No. Am I going to convert you to Reformed Baptist? No.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 19 hours ago
I liked that chapter about Cole. Sometimes fillers are okay if they further develop the character. Plus, it was one of your best.
you can even end it with his game death and then have him say something to a friend who’s on the game team about pulling through and winning that last one.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 19 hours ago
What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation? (For those who don’t know, reconciliation is where catholics go (supposed to be at least every month) to confess their sins. And then they are forgiven for them.) And what questions do you have. (That definition is the most simple version, there is more to it.)
I can copy and p…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 19 hours ago
And I think I’ll do another for R&L. However, I can’t figure out how to do the accent mark on this computer, so his name will have to be plain. Poor fellow.
@koshka @ellette-giselle casually stalking your charries…
Reuven (the bus)
His mustang would be out of the shop that evening. Reuven sighed and clipped his duffle closed. Having work in…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 19 hours ago
Kefa missed your tags.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 19 hours ago
My sleep deprived brain has finished my work and now does not want to do school work. XD So, hi y’all! It’s been a minute.
Not sure if I remember how exactly everything was going, but I don’t feel like going back again… We’ll just wing it. XD
Viktor (Library)
The little bunny fellow vanished back behind the table.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 20 hours ago
Praying too.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 21 hours ago
@savannah_grace2009 @koshka @theshadow
Sorry you three! I got busy on Monday…then the KP web wasn’t working on Tuesday…but I’ll read them today. So, stay tuned!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 10 hours ago
haha! 🤣
I would love to see a Rory jumping from the bus, arms, hair, legs, and shirt flying! 🤣
if you post anymore drawings let me know!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 11 hours ago
I found a round about way to get access!! (Don’t ask)
anyways!! I am really liking this!!
a few notes:
Everette (I think) asks if Sara knows who Jesus was. Now, unless you have a very different theology than I do, I believe it’s who Jesus “is” not “was”.
Also, unless I missed something, the last we had with Cole was his screen…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 12 hours ago
*screams and dances around the room*
*looks back at it and dies laughing*
oh my word!! It’s so accurate tho!! That is a total Leo expression! And Rory is… yeah, being Rory. 😂
draw another one!!!
please!!! Pretty please!! 🥹🥹
(you don’t have too if you don’t want)
you could do Rory running away from Barns…. Or Rory ye…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 12 hours ago
IS THAT ALAN ABD MARTHA!!?!? *excited dance*
umm…. I don’t do that. Like, at all. I just go for it after hitting beginning, climax, and end. And fully graphing characters. I sketch out the characters. 🤷🏼♀️
I mean, I treat writing as me telling you what happened to my friends. I saw the events, here they are. If I do too muc…[Read more]
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