Koshka

@linus-smallprint

Thanks.

@linus-smallprint

Okay, well at least you made me laugh really hard. 😂

@linus-smallprint

 

Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!

🤣

But it did! Really!

See, the car that hit me slowed down like it was going to stop, and then passed me and kept going. All I could think about was, “Dad is going to be so annoyed if he has to take on this hit-and-run investigation and there’s no license plate”

It…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.

i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yes! I’m planning, Lord willing, to write a book with these guys in it.

I did notice a few times that some words you used were either typos or not words at all (or words I’d never seen.)
Thanks. I think I caught all of those.

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more w…[Read more]

@grcr

(mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have)

I commend you for making up a restaurant. Mentioning real companies/brands in stories is a pet peeve of mine. XD

@keilah-h

yours are so wacky lol

The idea was to be wacky, but I wish I could say my last one is an exaggeration. It’s the most accurate out of the three. 🙃

Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.

Life be like that sometimes.

@keilah-h

don’t all eyes have blood in them though?

True, just his are completely red in the sclera

Guy with eyes that look like they have blood in them tries to get revenge on humanoid spider.

@keilah-h

@linus-smallprint

Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.

I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.

Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.

@linus-smallprint

Can you re-invite me.

Smaug attack.

Again.

Lost EVERYTHING.

Ugh.

@linus-smallprint

*enraged because I was never tagged by KP*

I will look at this as soon as I can. aka tomorrow.

Maybe.

@whalekeeper

anything you can offer.

@elishavet-pidyon

Yay!!

@hybridlore

Thanks.

Noted.

@ellette-giselle

Signing in for the long haul. I can look for rogue grammar and suspicious word choices.

Code key: nuanced syntax.

@savannah_grace2009

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through?

@koshka

Perfect!

@linus-smallprint

Yeah. Dented up my pretty blue car. 😢

@linus-smallprint

wait…. did this hot my inbox really late….. or was I on there before it was released?! 😱

I literally just got done commenting and editing chapter 32

@linus-smallprint

No kidding.

Plus someone crashed me yesterday going into town. Add that to the list. 🙄