Koshka

@esther-c

Do you really want to know?

@esther-c

I’m glad some of what I said was helpful! I’m excited to see what you end up doing in your story.

@keilah-h

He’s still a character of Wond, but otherwise he’s unrelated to my other stories.

@savannah_grace2009

I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Thank you for the feedback! I’m about to go edit the short story the scene is in, so this will be very helpful.

@savannah_grace2009

Sure thing! I may not be able to get it to right away…at least all of it, but I’m willing to help you!

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h

So…I just wrote this scene and i was wondering if it’s a little weird that I call the guy ‘Father’ all the time instead of giving him a real name. He isn’t a priest and he isn’t even Baron’s biological father. The reason I don’t give him a real name is that Baron doesn’t know what his real name is, he…[Read more]

@theshadow

Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now

How do you deal with him? He seems a little tough.

We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually…[Read more]

@keilah-h

by the way you did finish the fic right?

Oh dear, I forgot to tell you with CWW and going back to school, sorry!

I really really liked the ending! It was so sweet. My only criticism would be I kinda didn’t understand fully what was going on before that point, Otherwise, it was great!

@koshka

That is beautifully chilling. *applause*

ugh, idk what to rp. Last time Silvanis and I talked, he was criticizing my out-loud reading skills and i told him to stop talking.

@Koshka

AHHH!!!! I LOVE IT!!!

I can’t wait for more!!!

@smiley I love it!!! 😍😍😍 BUCKYYYYY

And I also love her dynamic with Tony 🤣🤣

@keilah-h it’s kinda interesting that you bring this up, bc it’s at least hinted at in the MCU that Steve was raided Christian

“There’s only one God, ma’am, and I’m pretty sure he doesn’t dress like that.”

And Thor and Loki, tho seen as “gods” aren’t actually…[Read more]

@grcr

HE IS SO STINKING COOL!!!

That’s slick that is!

Haha! AI murders hands!

Pockets are a good idea. My mom hates drawing hands so she always sketches her characters with them in their pockets or behind their backs. (If you want only one hand in the pocket you can turn the character slightly so that his hip and leg hides the other…[Read more]

@theducktator

YOU JUST RUINED THE TONE OF THAT SCENE!!!! XDXDXD!! lolololol.

@savannah_grace2009

That was really good! I liked it a lot! I have written a few desert scenes myself, and they always make me hot and thirsty. (Great scenes to write in the winter 😉 )

That would be really interesting for water people to be in a place where they…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, y’all have to see this! It is angering! This is Man On The Street. I love these, but they are SHOCKING!

Yup, it sure is…but you have to expect this to happen when people are not taught…like in schools. Even homeschooled families don’t always teach the right history either…American history is a big example.

I a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You’re welcome

@keilah-h

Which of your stories is he from?

He’s from an anthology series called the Baron Chronicles that I want to publish sometime this year if I can.

@keilah-h  @liberty

I know!!! But think…. if people in our country school systems and government are trying to make us forget the holocaust….. doesn’t that seems scary. Like, what might they be trying to do in the future?

Okay, y’all have to see this! It is angering! This is Man On The Street. I love these, but they are…[Read more]