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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @whalekeeper @keilah-h
Sorry for not posting in eight days. I hit Writer’s Block while trying to edit the next story to go on here and writing the next one 🙁
I’m not sure how long until I can post the full thing, but until then, I’m gonna post a snippet of the next…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
awesome! Glad I could be of help.
I think we’re all a little defensive of our stuff. 😂
I remember when you kept criticizing Aaron I was crushed because he’s a lot like me and I felt like you were criticizing me and saying I was a cardboard cutout. It took a few weeks for me to separate myself from him and see your cri…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
😊👍
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 6 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 6 days ago
I have succumbed. It took me long enough to find them, but it is done.
I had too much fun with this. XD
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Elishavet Elroi posted an update 1 week, 6 days ago
I think she was lost in her mind more often than anyone suspected. She had a peculiar habit of laughing when there was nothing to laugh about, and all too often she would smile off into empty space as if seeing a friendly face there.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
I really like this chapter! Everything critical I was going to say @hybridlore already covered.
I really enjoy these characters. I like how Jack sticks up for his sister, and I’m eager to find out what happens and where Elina got her scar!
make sure to keep tagging me because I’m really enjoying this.
and those girls giving her a h…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Feb. 15 sounds good, thx
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Fantastic! I’m so excited to read what you wrote!
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
The rules are that you write at least 500 words, and when the deadline day comes, you post your story here.
Micah 7:8 Do not rejoice over me, my enemy; when I fall, I will arise. When I sit in darkness, the Lord WILL be a light to me.
No idea what that means…
Perhaps, I can share why I love this verse so much:
This verse is Is…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks ago
i really love the direction.
character development seems good and solid. But it’s hard to know that from just reading an outline.
again, it all depends on how you play it, but I was feeling Eustace and dragon change more than Kalmar and wolf. (Even though it is a wolf) I think you’re fine and should go for it. I can let you…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
I like this much better. I feel more comfortable, but it also plays into the allegory style better. (At least in my opinion)
my only suggestion (besides fine combing because there were a few typos) is old be this paragraph.
I do not know what Alan thought as he used the spell, so instead of telling you that, let’s say he in…
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Great! I’m looking forward to it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
thank you both for the sympathy and prayers!!
Great timing!
thank you!! I was proud of that one. 😂
oh dear! I hope you end up liking Roland then. 😅
I promise it was completely coincidental.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah_h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet_pidyon @power @jonas
Please pardon me, everyone…I can’t believe I forgot about the deadline!!!!! So sorry about that…
Well, it looks like all things work together for good since Esthe…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h
The others:@power @calyhuge @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity @savannah_grace2009 @koshka
Please pard…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Oh, I forgot to tag you:
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