Koshka

@freedomwriter76

Maybe they can run into Almarrin? I’m thinking that a lot of the kids here see him and think he’s a bully, because of his size and reserved manner, so he hasn’t actually met any kids here.

Which is kind of fine too, since he’s probably preoccupied with spying on the bad guys and forming plans to systematically take them down. So…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 we’re still on the road headed home, so we listened online. It was very good, about how praise heals, and trials grow patience ect. (From James and Romans). @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Oh Hitchens has no idea how close he came to one of those brothers hunting him down.

And um…so the poetic justice of using one of the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

AWWWW….

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Inglor

“Whoop-de-doo? That’s a phrase I’ve never heard before.” Mirth danced in his leaf green eyes. “But then, I’ve never been around many other peoples before.”

Almarrin

Psychology was such an interesting thing, especially when it could be studied through observation. From his vantage point behind a door he could hear one…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Okay y’all!

Zlatan

The little fox whimpered in a fitful sleep, his head jerking slightly as if he was still fighting. Zlatan frowned.

Nyx needed help, yet how could he get him it, here in a forsaken castle.

There was always…but what if…he shook his head and dug out the little green…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Inglor

What did elves smell like?

He shook his head and turned back to Luna.

“I look young because I am young. Fifty years of my life are like fifteen of others. You see,” he sighed, wondering how to explain. “I am an Alve, one of the fair folk, child of the morning star.”

She still looked a bit confused, but he hoped un…[Read more]

Eira

At last, class in over. I gather my things and brush my hair back over one shoulder. It slips through my fingers like limp silk, slight waves all that is left of my curls. With a sigh I heave my backpack into place and shuffle from the room into another empty hall. Why the schedule here makes no sense, I don’t know nor do I care.

My feet…[Read more]

@felicity

I stalked for some time too. It’s totally fun!

Why thank you, I thought so too. XD

@godlyfantasy12

I hope you don’t mind me putting them in the same class, but I had another scene idea…

Inglor

Nyx wanted to skip class, that much was clear.  He frowned slightly and traced the leaf on his shirt collar. “Geometry? I have that also.” He glanced at Almarrin.

“Psychology of aggression.” The grey eyes were smiling.

“Ai! Well…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Oooo, I want more of these characters, even if I’m not exactly a romance reader. That does help with the background. =)

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Almarrin

The elf smiled. “Êl síla erin lû e-govaned vîn, Dolunay, Nyx. I am Inglor Avelorion, and this is my friend Almarrin Woden.”

Almarrin bowed, but his attention was moving on. “Classes, Inglor.”

“Brother,” Inglor clamped a hand on his arm. “Are these your manners?”

“I bowe…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Go pound em, Ezra!!!!

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Yes, the Alven have pointed ears, but they’re regular size. (Luna is adorable)

Inglor

Most of the students here walked in shadow as if fear itself lurked in the corners. They also gave Almarrin and him a wide berth. He frowned, the dance in his step diminishing.

Then a smile, one bright,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

My phone is about to die though, so It would be better if you introduce them, while I hunt for my charger.

@godlyfantasy12

Sure! (Nyx and Almarrin…that would be hilarious)

@elishavet-pidyon

Go ahead!

@godlyfantasy12

I just had this scene pop into my head where Luna and Inglor meet!

“Well, hello, little sister.” Blinks at her purple hair and eyes with a slightly bewildered ‘where are you from?’ expression.

@godlyfantasy12

Ugh, November…*groan* no one better touch him again! I have an elf and a half-elf in my ranks.

(Yes Aramis, that was a threat)

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12 @wilder-w

Y’all’s character is are so…so…AHH!! You have to save them, the poor, dear, charies!

Anyway…

Almarrin

Whispers all this morning were stirring the quiet anger inside him.

“From the second story…”

“…heard he just tripped…”

Almarrin slung his backpack over his shoulder,…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Everyone else basically said exactly what I was going to, so here’s a condensed form of my two cents:

I would make it about Briana, not girls. So say something like “Why am I not taking a watch?”, just to remove the focus at the beginning. I would also revise the part about being pretty. Maybe put inphasis on ‘I’m your king,’…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Cécile 

The moment these two had appeared the rest of the group went nearly rigid. As soon as the man had started speaking, she almost had to hold Annia back. The girl’s hands were held at her waist in tight fists, showing her calloused knuckles.

“Annia, no.” Cécile whispered in her ear. “Breaking his nose wo…[Read more]